A1l3xDragon Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Hi! It's my first card: Can you rate it please? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 ok good effort. there are some OCG errors in the card. pic is stretched and also overused but that cant be helped. 4/10 as you a beginner. Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A1l3xDragon Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Thanks for your rating but what's OCG :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Original Card Gramma. its the use of capitals commas and sence in the effects and descriptions.Prince of Chaos the effect should be somthing like:This card gains 200 ATK and DEF points for every card in your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nigioh Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 I like the picture and if you change the OCG as to said above. i reckon it will be better... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A1l3xDragon Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Ok thanks ^^ I'm going change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fizzy™ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Not bad for your very first card so 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koji123456789 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Umm. 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Poison Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 OCG errorsoverpoweredoverused picturestretched picture0/10GTFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Fix OCG:"This card gains 200 ATK. and DEF. points for each card in your hand." - Or something like this. Try to change the Lvl. to 7, it would be better.The pic is overused, but as this is your very first card, my rate is 8/10. Fix it and i'll change to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 It's alright. Good, but nothing special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Are u sure thats ur first card, because its really good for a new member :)9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 OCG errorsoverpoweredoverused picturestretched picture0/10GTFO If you think this card is Overpowered then you are mentally retarded. -not bad, bland, OCG errors, and yea overused pic- 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 good card7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daleyboy Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 overused pic but how r u to no if its ur first card? i got told the same on my first card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ѕ¢єρтяυм Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Good pic. Unoriginal name, thought. Effect is bland, but... Well, 9/10. Good for a first card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Creativity - Dont' like dragons much, and the name is unoriginal.Effect/Description - [b+] Simple, but useful.Pic - [b-] Overused pic and...'OCG - [A] OCG is great for a new member.Overall - - Great first card, man1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondraggon Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Wow nice job way better than my first card :). 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 as said, ocg errors, the pic is overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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