Brendano Harns Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Here is a card that took me a long time to make (because of the pic). I drew the dragon in pencil, and used old primitive paint to color it in using the polygon tool. The bacground was actually something I salvaged from Windows. I know that it is slightly overpowered, but I want it to be a strong card. Suggestions and ratings plz! (suggestions wanted more than ratings) Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersDuring each Standby Phase, you must pay 1000 Life Points. If you cannot, this card's ATK and DEF are decreased by 500. When this card declares an attack, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. When this card is destroyed by a Card Effect controlled by your opponent, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 I don't really like it.3/10 cause you drew the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 I don't really like it.3/10 cause you drew the pic That's OK. Thnx fr the rating!:DReadable effect added, so...^BUMP^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 slightly?... I can't read the effect =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabby181 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Post the effect, i cant read it.The ATK/DEF is very OP. I like that you drew the pic yourself :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 WAY overpowered, despite the cost. Pic is pretty good for a drawing. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holygiant Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 It could be better, it's decent. 5/10, considering you drew it. The unreadable text brought your score down about two points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 THe effect is under the card! TNX 4 the ratings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~LunaticTouhou~ Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Its overpowered but good pic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Its overpowered but good pic! Tnx 4 the comment, and ty 4 commenting on the pic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 ^^^BUMP^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 So, any more suggestions or comments? I tweaked the effect so it's not really overpowered that much anymore... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dray Kaiba Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 well the pic is horrible (sorry), i can read the effect, and the card is kind of overpowered, but i see why beacuse u must give up 2000 life points. maybe lower the atk to bout 5000 and keep the effect and boom nice card. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 Thx 4 the suggestion! I am trying to get wolfbeserker to enhance the image 4 me, and i suppose i will mod the card slightly. again, thnx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 I like the background, don't capitalize card or effect, change 2000 to 1000, During each of your Standby Phases, change ATK to 4000. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 ^^^BUMP^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 nothing against your pic i just dont feel hand drawn should be posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Ok, 7500 ATK is far too high! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 I'm Struggling 2 keep it that way, but downgrade it enough so that it can keep its 7500 attacking power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 The ATK is way to high. The highest a monster's original ATK can be is 5000. Aside from that it is actually a decent card, kudos to you for drawing it, just a few bits to tweak and it'll be playable... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 I REALLY like the 7500 ATK, but I guess since that is the thing that everyone comments on, I go in and change that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 You could try giving it an extra effect that will result in it having 7500 ATK, I'm sure that would be acceptable so long as it's not OP... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 WAY overpowered,a crappe pic(sorry)LOWER THE ATTACK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 ^^^BUMP^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Nice pic, good card, nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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