My new cards

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here is the start

[Bengal]

Since this is your first post I will go easy, don't expect that from other members though ;)

 

The pictures could be better, try to get ones with backgrounds.

 

I would give the first card an effect becasue Normal Monsters don't show that much creativity.

 

Read the OCG/grammar thread to make sure you capatalize and word things right in the effects.

 

Don't use fake types, although you can make a sub-type if you want.

 

Lastly, the last card is overpowered, 2300 DEF is alot for a Level 2.

[PrimalFear]

pics are bad needs backgrounds, Ocg errors and last one is overpowered, 4/10

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[/size]Ok thank you for your reply.

Here is my new card

Plz vote

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[╬「Selatcia」╬]

selected as an attack target

 

two = 2

 

Spell & Trap Card Zone

 

Graveyard

 

one = 1

 

Spell or Trap Card

 

may = can

 

Summon

 

three = 3

 

"Dweller Tokens"

 

"Spell Tokens"

[:ABC:]

ty for your reply ill get that fixed

kk heres an edit

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

a lot of errors.pictures are strange.6/10

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i used these pic because they look like demons which is what a dweller is. ty for the rate.

heres newest

equip card next, REPLY PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.

Last night because some people thought that my new monster Hell's Underlord, Lucifur was over powered i edited it.

this is the result

THE FIRST THREE PEOPLE TO COMMENT I WILL GIVE 1 REP point(S) EACH

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BUM... BUM... BUMP!!!!!!

[Shiranui]

First of all you need to stop making fake types. People have pointed it out and you keep doing it...-.-

Next of all no Divine Beasts. Also needs background. You couldn't find something better than Nightmare? OCG needs work. Sorry.

4.5/10

[:ABC:]

thats ok i been trying some new stuff on my cards and ill have a new one out soon.

Edit: here it is 2 of my new Hellion Creatures

[Shiranui]

Just wondering but can you even have something with a negative DEF value? BTW that Pic looks really familiar for some reason...like Fire Emblem. *shrugs*

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Well i thought if you can have a neg level monster why not have neg stats.

EDIT:

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bump

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EDIT2:EDIT5: this is a card i made two of

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