My 1st Vampire type: Lesser Minion

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Ok, I've started my whole campaign thingy of making a vampire series or w/e you want to call it. Here's Lesser Minion:

 

 

Effect:

If this card is destroyed as a result of Battle while in face-up Attack Position it is returned to the owner's hand. During your next Standby Phase if this card is still in face-up Attack Position, Special Summon 1 "Ghoul Token" (Zombie-Type/Dark/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 500) and place 2 Ghoul Counters on this token. The "Ghoul Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). During each End Phase remove 1 Ghoul Counter from all "Ghoul Tokens" you control, if all Ghoul Counters have been removed from a "Ghoul Token" destroy that card.

 

 

There's a reason for the Ghoul Tokens which will go with other cards I will be making. I want to know if I worded everything correctly and what not and also what you guys think.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

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Use fiend as the type. New types don't go well unless they're subtypes.

 

I like the idea.

 

Smexy pic. 8)

 

8.5/10

[†Gravity Binder†]

Use orignal Types and work on the OCG a lil bit... not bad for a beginner ^_^ 8/10

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The problem with using Fiend type is that I was planing on making cards that specifically go with cards that either have Vampire in the name or is a Vampire type. So saying fiend type instead would mean that all these cards I wanna make will also work on fiends, might screw with things a bit.

 

Edit: Ok, fixed the whole DEF thing and changed her stats slightly.

[~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~]

Usually, people put fake-typers in the other cards section.

 

This is becasue they technically can't be realistic...

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Usually' date=' people put fake-typers in the other cards section.

 

This is becasue they technically can't be realistic...

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Hmmm, then I guess I'll have to add Vampire to the names instead. :(