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Skarlet

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Very Bad OCG.

 

Face-up = face-up

Missing some commas.

Why is "all" capitalized?

Do not put "attribute" after FIRE. It is just FIRE.

Why if Life Points joined in the second sentence?

"monster" is not capitalized, unless it is following "Synchro" or "Fusion" etc.

Defense position = Defense Position

 

Wording is slightly off too =/

 

 

 

Pic is ok, in regards to the new DA rule.

 

Make it half the combined ATK of all Released monsters. This helps balance your card.

 

And for creativity, the name is ok, but the effect is pretty average.

 

 

OCG: 1.2/3

Pic: 1.8/2

Creativity: 1.7/3

Balance: 1.2/2

 

Total: 5.9/10

 

 

 

You did want a comprehensive rating =P

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