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[align=center]I'll update this thread constantly ^_^ I will post my singles here, which together may eventually become a set =P

 

All image credit goes to Konami, and me. I will mention under the card in case of exceptions to this statement.

 

 

[spoiler=Red Dragon Archfiend- Ghost]1-9-1.png

 

[spoiler=Card Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own effect. Place this card in your Extra Deck, instead of your Deck. This card is treated as a part of your Extra Deck. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck, when a face-up "Red Dragon Archfiend" you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, by skipping your Battle Phase, destroy all cards on the field, except this card, and have this card lose 600 ATK. When the ATK of this card is 1000 or less, you can Tribute it to Special Summon 1 "Red Dragon Archfiend" from your Graveyard. During your End Phase, if you do not have "Red Dragon Archfiend" in your Graveyard, destroy this card, and inflict damage to both player's Life Points equal to the ATK of this card when it was destroyed.

 

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Nice I love it' date=' but you need to clarify, Does it count towards the cards in your deck, and go to the extra deck at the start of duels, if so, in a set, ppl would abuse these to effectivly get 25 card exodia decks, draw power would then make for a Probable OTK

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It is clarified ^_^

 

It counts as a part of your extra deck, not your Main Deck. If it would move at the start of the duel, as you suggested, then it would have been worded like this:

 

"At the start of each Duel, place this card in your Extra Deck."

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Weird. All cards in Extra Deck are Violet-Coloured and White-Coloured. Maybe you should make a new sub-type, Ghost. Pink (kidding:p) coloured cards, placed in Extra Deck. For the picture, I expect more creativity from you, like you did with Nitro Warrior/Buster. It's just the same art like the original Red Demons Dragon, but you edited it. Effect seems pretty balaced, though.

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Weird. All cards in Extra Deck are Violet-Coloured and White-Coloured. Maybe you should make a new sub-type' date=' Ghost. Pink (kidding:p) coloured cards, placed in Extra Deck. For the picture, I expect more creativity from you, like you did with Nitro Warrior/Buster. It's just the same art like the original Red Demons Dragon, but you edited it. Effect seems pretty balaced, though.

 

Well, of course the pic would be the same lol, its a ghost version =P

 

And this card is an exception to that rule. There is no rule that says only colored cards are placed in the extra deck.

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I didn't say it's wrong. I said it's weird. But seriously, for the art, even though it's a counterpart, no card has the perfectly similar pose to its real form. But alright, you've done great job on the picture. I hope you make more Ghost cards.

 

P.S.: May I know the password of your Photobucket gallery? What are inside your gallery?

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I didn't say it's wrong. I said it's weird. But seriously' date=' for the art, even though it's a counterpart, no card has the perfectly similar [b']pose[/b] to its real form. But alright, you've done great job on the picture. I hope you make more Ghost cards.

 

P.S.: May I know the password of your Photobucket gallery? What are inside your gallery?

 

lol I know what you mean, but I have further plans ;)

 

And the password for my gallery? Thats a secret =P

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Should be: Reduce this card's ATK by 600' date=' good pic and effect. 8/10

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I got that checked ;) It is how I worded it in the new tcg.

 

 

 

just 2 errors:

 

except this face-up card = (except this card)

 

take out "when it was destroyed" at the very end of the effect.

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Not too bad.

 

8/10

 

Thanks. The second part wasn't an error, but I must have missed the first one =D

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Cool card and idea.

 

As for OCG, I see several unneeded commas.

 

Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own effect. Place this card in your Extra Deck instead of your Deck. This card is treated as a part of your Extra Deck. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck when a face-up "Red Dragon Archfiend" you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, by skipping your Battle Phase, destroy all cards on the field (except this card) and decrease the ATK of this card by 600. When the ATK of this card is 1000 or less, you can Tribute it to Special Summon 1 "Red Dragon Archfiend" from your Graveyard. During your End Phase, if you do not have "Red Dragon Archfiend" in your Graveyard, destroy this card and inflict damage to both player's Life Points equal to the ATK of this card.

 

Very original idea, though.

 

9/10

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