RoseL Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Sorry no picture on card couldn't find one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 With no pic, you could have just written it in the Written Cards section. Card 2 needs an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Take out "To summon this card" End Phase Close up the space in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Take out "To summon this card" End Phase Close up the space in the effect. what he said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Mercury Winged Dragon = Red Dragon Archfiend. Change. Second card could use an effect (or at least spice up the flavor text) , and you can find much better pics then that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Your "Mercury Dragon" is the same thing as Red Daemons Dragon (Red Dragon Archfiend). Try to come up with an original effect. Aqua Dragon should have an effect, or at least a good description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jam527 Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 iyou took the effect from red dragon archfiend! >:| and aqua dragon desription sucks!-1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 For card 1, lots of grammar problems, no pic.Card 2, effect, okay, balanced.Overall, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Aqua Dragon is a real card. Mercury Dragon's effect is exactly the same as Red Dragons. If theyres no pic, put it in the written card section. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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