ziberteck Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 My Phoenix card I'm working on. Not sure if the Effect is worded right for a yugioh card.(Still haven't gotten used to it yet :P)Pic credit: http://featherdust.critter.net/digitaloldhtml/pages/Crystal%20Phoenix.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Replace all the card names in the effects with "this card" or the name of the card in question. After the 2nd standby phase in which this card was destroyed, special summon one "The "Phoenix" from the graveyard face up on your side of the field. This should be "The Phoenix"s effect! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziberteck Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Hm are you sure?Some how doesn't look right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Change the first line to: On the second standby phase after this card was destroyed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Pretty good, just a few errors: Card = cardField = fieldFace up = face-up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 `its overpowered, you can respawn it as many times as u want, mind you, with 2000 ATK, i dont think it'll stand much chance, should make it so it gets respawned once per duel. 6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziberteck Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 `its overpowered' date=' you can respawn it as many times as u want, mind you, with 2000 ATK, i dont think it'll stand much chance, should make it so it gets respawned once per duel. 6.2/10[/quote']Not really OP you can always use a card that removes cards from play like soul release Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 The card image won't appear for me, but judging from what the others have said, it sounds good, but you need to work on your OCG a bit. The picture is good aswell, so 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Should be: Special Summon 1 "The Phoenix" from your Graveyard. Good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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