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Madsen

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Crobat+Aerodactyl's main problem I don't like is the wings. The way they are position it seems weird. First the wings seem to blend with the ears. If I try and ignore this fact, it looks like they are growing out the back of its neck, which also doesn't make sense really. They should be coming out of similar areas that Crobat's actual wings come out. Shading on the legs also isn't right either, too bright and in the wrong area. You also have left over gray borders, which isn't good.

 

Chinchou+Sunflora is kind of neat. I want to say it actually looks like pumpkin, which is kind of cool. It does however have errors. A very noticeable one would be those darn blue borders. When recoloring, you have to get to the borders too. Blue doesn't look right bordering green and yellow. I also think the right leaf could have been done better, perhaps overlapping the body. The connection point between the feet and body could be fixed up too. The lines going around the head could be a tad rounder too.

 

Pichu+Jumpluff I find too simple. All you did was color change and add the fluff. A little more could have been added from Jumpluff. Also like the other two, you neglected border colors, there is still a dark yellow everywhere, which horribly clashes.

 

Feraligator+Lanturn is nice in concept, but a few things are messed up. One thing is the texture, and it kind of prevents it from being amazing. The arms and legs look scaly and stuff, while the lanturn body looks very smooth. These two things clash, and make them look not so complete. Another flaw would be in the bottom right, you have some border and connect issues with the tail and leg. Also again you didn't reshade borders, but I guess for this one it isn't very noticeable. A cool suggestion would be make those little arm and knee bad things on the legs and arms you could turn the yellow color, I think that might look cool.

 

Well you may have noticed I mentioned with each one that you neglected border recoloring. Well I find that neglecting it really brings down the quality of a splice. It's something that can usually be easily fixed, but I see ignored too often. Doing so to these sprites would make them noticeably better I would believe.

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