Man0waR Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 pic from google. I dont know who the artist is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 ok. ocg is lacking and you have some spelling errors but otherwise its pretty goood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 no spelling mistakes.... and its alriyte i guess 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 This is too similar to The Splendid Venus...Summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 when this card is summoned= when this card is successfully summoned (may not be right)boring and unoriginal effect. Pretty Overpowered. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 Summoned, that's I used, but I don't mind, swap her ATK with DEF. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 whats splendid venus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 I've used that pic, Summoned, switch ATK and DEF. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 whats splendid venus? http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Image:SplendidVenusTDGS-EN-ScR-1E.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaneBeutler Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 The card is well done but I dont think the writing should be gold, I suggest silver. Nice though goo effect, nice OCG. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 why I made a disission and I'm stcking wit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 whats splendid venus? http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Image:SplendidVenusTDGS-EN-ScR-1E.png I see now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Only OCG error is Summoned, not summoned. Far too similar to Splendid Venus, and pic is overused. Card Rating: 6/10 - too similar to Venus, and despite the wording difference pretty much does the same purpose. SOrry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 OCG errors: summoned = Summoned Other then that, the OCG is good, but the effect is pretty simple, 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Summoned is capitalized. Like Spire said, too simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 aww man. Well as in the title ( not my best effort ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 All you need to do make the effect more intersting and it will be great! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 ok I'll do that when I get out of school. ;) (I'm 14) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Overused pic, XD when I was A low Level Member Around about 1 all my cards Had that pic XD! but hey That's just Bad Luck (don't ask where my Stars Have gone) Effect Is Ssimple Maybe too SimpleCaps Summon. ^But Hey I don't See Any cg Errors Apart from |Caps SummonCaps Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 where r ur stars XD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Lolz I Told You Not to ask XD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 I did anyway XD! Now talk XD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 summon = Summon. Slightly overpowered with the last bit of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 I dn't Know! lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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