The Dark Warrior With The Light Sword

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Effect : You can change the Attribute of this monster to LIGHT. The effect this card has depends on his Attribute. When this card is DARK your opponents loses 300 Life Points during each Standby Phase. When this card is LIGHT you gain 300 Life Points during each Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, you can draw 2 cards from your deck in adition you opponent draws cards until he has 6 cards in his hand.

 

 

Pic : http://images.elfwood.com/art/n/a/natalieanne/pic_finished.jpg

[Professor Cobra]

Grammar problems, good pic, in addition, don't capitalize with, needs rewording. 7/10

[Brendano Harns]

:shock: OCG ERRORS like this are infesting the forums on YCM. RUN!!! IT IS COMING!!! AHH!!!

 

MY VERSION-

 

Name: Blinding Darkness Swordsman

 

Attribute: DARK

 

LV: 7

 

Effect : During your Standby Phase, you can change the Attribute of this monster to LIGHT. This card gains the following effect(s) according to its Attribute:

-DARK: Your opponent loses 3oo Life Points during each Standby Phase.

-LIGHT-During each Standby Phase, your Life Points are increased by 300. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, draw 3 cards. Your opponent then draws until he/she is holding 6 cards in his/her hand.

 

ATK/ 2100 DEF/1900

[BSTuna]

lower this to LV4

[Shocked]

OCG not good. But good pic and effect

8/10

[Spire]

OCG errors:

 

deck = Deck

 

Effect is pretty good, 7.9/10.