Alcander Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 this is my new card, I hope you like it. Please rate it!I found the image in Google. :? Effect of the card:When this card is Advance Summon, this card can attack twice, if you do, you discard the first 2 cards of top-Deck Inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each Warrior-Type. Pay 1000 of your life points and when this card targets a face-down Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field in battle, the ATK of this card becomes 2300 during that damage calculation only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaneBeutler Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Good Name, Star Level matches ATK and DEF. Effect is resonable, Few OCG errors here and there. Like Advanced Summoned, not Advance Summoned comma's in incorrect place. Also Top-Deck, with capitals, Life Points, capitalized, Face-Down capitalized. But good overall good job. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted November 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Good Name' date=' Star Level matches ATK and DEF. Effect is resonable, Few OCG errors here and there. Like Advanced Summoned, not Advance Summoned comma's in incorrect place. Also Top-Deck, with capitals, Life Points, capitalized, Face-Down capitalized. But good overall good job. 7/10[/quote'] thanks sigh .. I thought it was fine. I have to fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaneBeutler Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Good Name' date=' Star Level matches ATK and DEF. Effect is resonable, Few OCG errors here and there. Like Advanced Summoned, not Advance Summoned comma's in incorrect place. Also Top-Deck, with capitals, Life Points, capitalized, Face-Down capitalized. But good overall good job. 7/10[/quote'] thanks sigh .. I thought it was fine. I have to fix it No, man really it's a good card, it just some people on this website are very picky, and the OCG is really the only problem just fix up the written and it will work out alot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted November 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Fix.Effect of the card. When this card is Advance Summoned, this card can attack twice, if you do, you discard the first 2 cards of Top-Deck Inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each Warrior-Type. Pay 1000 of your Life Points and when this card targets a Face-Down Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field in battle, the ATK of this card becomes 2300 during that damage calculation only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaneBeutler Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Fix.Effect of the card. When this card is Advance Summoned' date=' this card can attack twice, if you do, you discard the first 2 cards of Top-Deck Inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each Warrior-Type. Pay 1000 of your Life Points and when this card targets a Face-Down Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field in battle, the ATK of this card becomes 2300 during that damage calculation only.[/quote'] Looking alot better. Im pretty sure if you re-fresh your post so it re-appears back at the top you'll get alot more good replies. Good job, I rate it 9/10, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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