Startin a new set. Constructive criticism is accepted and appreciated

[Supernova513]

Just some cards from 2 new sets I am creating they go hand in hand. They are "opposites' of each other. *Note* If you have trouble reading any card effects or info, just post a comment and I will fix it. thx

 

[ShaneBeutler]

Really nice set, all cards very creatice. All of your OCG's are pretty much perfect. I only noticed about 2 things in total that I would of wanted to change myself. 9/10

-Could I suggest mabye adding a "field" card to go with the set, and mabye one more trap card.

-If it's your thing you should add a Synchro as well.

[Jazza 101]

10/10

[Chinotornes]

9.99999999999/10 (nothing is perfect but these are close to perfect cards, some of the pics are overused, but u did them justice)

[Spire]

Image credit is needed. I quite like the pics, solid OCG, 8.3/10.

[K.B. strategist]

Tribute

Deck

1, not one

can, not may

"In order to" can just be "to"

 

Excellent pics, fair ocg, but many of the cards are OP; they'd end up on the banlist right away. Also, post the effects under the cards for some of them. We can't read Dark Brightwing and Bright Wingman's effects and a few others we have to squint to read.