Darkdragonriseing Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Ok now I made some changes and thanks to someones help and I do thank that person a lot this card is less OP hopefully. Image comes from Photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Way better. The effect is balanced out in a decent manner. The only thing you have to work on now is OCG. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 OCG okayGreat picGood effectMaybe you can change the level to 6 / 7 its not fair with that ATKBut is great8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 You can Special Summon this card with no tributes. If this card is Special Summoned this way, it is destroyed during the next End Phase. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, draw 2 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Special Summon this card with no tributes. If this card is Special Summoned by its effect send it to the Graveyard during your End Phase and draw 2 cards. Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 OCG is okPic is something I've seen many times. I wouldn't call it OU just seen before.Make it's level 6. I give an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Pic is overused. The wording is slightly off. It's quite overpowered because you could special summon it using it's effect, and when it's destroyed at the end of your turn, you get to draw two cards. Add a drawback like, "When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard your entire hand" I'm not sure, but just work on a drawback, 7.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 agreed with spire much better than last one a few pointers. work on ocg . try to look a other cards and hope no one has used the pic so it isn't overused. Add A Drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Should be: with no Tributes, good pic, If you use this effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Same as above, personally i like he card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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