Dr.Pain Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Spider of Entangling DeathArtworkLower right cornor of cardThe CardEffectBefore the Damage Step in which this card attacked a face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field, Negate the attack and place this card in the Spell and Trap Card Zone. While this card is in a Spell and Trap Card Zone, this card is treated as an equip spell card equiped to the monster you attacked. Decrease the ATK of that monster by 300 each turn. When the equiped monster's ATK is less than half of it's original ATK, Destroy that monster and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position on your side of the fieldFinal NotesYou May...•Rate•Give Sugestions•Give Contructive Critizm•Point out OCG errors•Post your comments! Thank You! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 GREAT!!!I really like it,...But,a lot of OCG mistakes,...;)8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted November 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 GREAT!!!I really like it' date='...But,a lot of OCG mistakes,...;)8/10 ^_^[/quote'] Thx for comment! Could you tell me what mistakes in the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Good card, I the picture is alright, the OCG/grammar isn't too bad, and the effect is creative. OCG/grammar errors: equip spell card = Equip Spell Card Destroy = destroy Negate = negate "each turn" = "during each of your(/your opponent's) *insert phase*" 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 And also don't capitalize the letters after the ,and don't put , where it isn't necessary,...Like your first and last sentence,...;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Equip Spell Card, don't capitalize negate or destroy, good pic, nice effect. 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benben222 Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 realy cool dark spider thing and super cool pic ..........dieeeeeeeeeeee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Should be: Equip Spell Card, good pic, don't capitalize destroy and negate. Nice effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Once again, the above have said it all. I like the piuc thouigh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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