2 Cards: Doll From The Void + Mercenary Of Demise

[A●O●J]

*Doll From The Void*

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[spoiler=[size=large]Effect[/size]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing DARK monsters. When this card successfully destroys a monster as a result of battle, you can select 1 face-up monster on the field and remove it from play. Inflict half of the removed monster's ATK as damage to both player's Life Points. You can place this card in your Deck face-up. The Deck is then Shuffled. When this card is drawn face-up, you can discard this card to destroy all cards on the field. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you take damage equal to the attacking monster's ATK.

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Picture Credit:Wolfberserker(for more information, Check out his thread in the Showcase Section)[/align]

 

*If a nubcake tries to tell im "not getting proper image credit"...I may throw a temper tantrum and insult your mother.so ya better watch out.*

[Jazza 101]

1st one is ok. 1 ocg error and a little OP. make it 1000 damage for it or 500 even.

2nd ones first part make no sense and very OP.

[A●O●J]

1st one is ok. 1 ocg error and a little OP. make it 1000 damage for it or 500 even.

2nd ones first part make no sense and very OP.

Yes i guess he is very op, so i fixed his effect. But the first effect, how does it not make sense?It makes perfect sense.

[A●O●J]

bump

[Infernalhero]

I like em both they're good.9.5/10

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UR NAWT GIVE PUPRER IMG CREDIT! Just jokin'. XD

 

OCG fix for card Doll From The Void:

 

This card can be treated as any number of Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a DARK monster. When this card is Tributed, you take damage equal to the Level of the Tribute Summoned monster x 100. When this card is used as a Tribute, it is removed from play.

 

Also, don't cap the f and t in From The, because they don't need it, check Return from the Different Dimension as proof.

 

And for card 2:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 DARK monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can remove from play 1 face-up monster on the field and inflict damage to each player equal to half of the ATK of the selected monster. You can put this card face-up in your Deck and shuffle it. When you draw this face-up card, you can discard it to destroy all cards on the field. When this card is destroyed by battle, you take damage equal to the attacking monster's ATK.

 

Don't cap O in of.

 

For set ids, first part before dash is 4 letters, ain't 5. =P

 

Fix em up and run em in contests. ^_^

[iKiller]

Some grammar errors, one OCG error. Good job, I'd like them in my deck ;) 8/10

[Bengal]

Good cards, I like the pictures, Dark Edo Phoenix fixed the OCG/grammar, and the effects seem pretty useful.

 

good work,

 

9/10