Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Hello. Some of you may know me, I post mainly in the Custom Cards Section. I have rated many cards, pointed alot of errors, and sometimes given good advice, but never in a long time has anyone do that for me, as I don't make cards often. Recently, I achieved 5000 posts and 6 stars and thought, "Why not make a card for this special momment?" So today, i've made my first card in months. I started thinking about what sort of card to make. Then I saw a card on the internet, it was a Rock-Type monster. That made me realise that I have yet to see a single Rock-Type since I joined this forum. So today I bring you a new Rock monster. I'm unsure about if the effect is balanced or not, if you have any suggestions please don't hesitate to post, thank you. [spoiler=[size=x-small]Ancient Relic Ore Beast[/size]] [spoiler=[size=x-small]Card Lore[/size]]When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, it is removed from play. As long as this card remains removed from play, each time a Rock-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target by an opponent's monster, you can remove from play the bottom card of your Deck. Once per turn, if 5 or more monsters were removed from play by this effect, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Rock-Type monster to your side of the field and it gains 500 ATK. During the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect, pay 1000 Life Points, if you do not, negate the effect of this card. The monster Special Summoned by this card's effect cannot attack your opponent directly. When a monster Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300. [spoiler=[size=x-small]Image Credit[/size]]http://media.photobucket.com/image/earth%20dragon/fate_026/Rock_Dragon_by_VegasMike.jpg?o=138Image from here, and I do not claim this image as my own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 1st Post :D Awesome picture, effect, not too overpowered, holo, everything!Spire, make more cards!Epic/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Nice pic and holoing.A nice theme to the effect and perfect OCG.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 who gave you the 1 star?? that card is incredible 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 OMG, three 10/10's in a row!?! @ KillerxKid- Thanks alot! ^_^ And, i'm going to start taking on 1 and 1's and making cards now, this was just to warm up.@ Zaca- Thanks, I appreciate it.@ Dannyboy9876- Thanks! Who voted? -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 I agree with every body else 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 It wasn't three 10's in a row. It was; Epic | 10 | 10 I'll get warmed up, then take you on. I need better effect thinking-up-of skills :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 OCG errors... But let me fix it: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, remove this card from play. As long as this card remains removed from play, each time a Rock-Type monster you control is targeted by an opponent's monster, you can remove the bottom card of your Deck from play. Whenever you have 5 cards or more removed from play by this effect, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Rock-Type monster to your side of the field that has been removed from play with an additional 500 ATK. The Special Summoned monster cannot attack directly. When a Rock-Type monster Summoned by this effect is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300. Not sure about the bolded effect, but I'll leave it like that... Congratulations about the 6 stars. Hmm... About what you said of 1 on 1 matches, how about against me?So, you're gonna challenge me or Killer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 1st post in ages.. Well done, mate! EPIC/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 @ God Duelist- Yeah, I wasn't sure how to word it. Thanks alot though! ^_^ And yeah, i'll have a 1- on-1 against you, I have yet to have a 1 on 1 so i'd be more then happy to. We can discuss that by pm. @Senyuu, thanks, your too kind! ^_^ @Killer- Sure we can have a 1 on 1 when your ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 PM me when you've got time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Will do ^_^ Anyway, this is kinda getting to spam, this thread is about the card, not a 1 on 1, as I said, pm me. Any comments about the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Spire I'll MaybE 1-1 you Aswell I May Not Be As Legendary But I sURE Pack A Punch XDIt gonna be hard beating you though! 10/10 for the card tho! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Thanks! ^_^ I've seen some of your cards and your good, but I want to go up against someone easier first, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Lol Xd Yea I see What You Mean Lolz Hey Can I send you A message of my newest Card Link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Exceptional card, I have seen the picture before but you have holoed it very well, the OCG/grammar is of course great, and the effect is interesting and creative. Brilliant work, 10/10 Congratulations on 5000 posts btw ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Thanks Bengal, means alot! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 This is awesome. I even wrote in green. Color I claimed for special occasions. This is epic WIN! WIN/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 OCG fix: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, it is removed from play. As long as this card remains removed from play, each time a Rock-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target by an opponent's monster, you can remove from play the bottom card of your Deck. Once per turn, if 5 or more monsters were removed from play by this effect, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Rock-Type monster to your side of the field that has been removed from play with and it gains 500 ATK. The monster Special Summoned by this card's effect cannot attack your opponent directly. When a monster Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300. It needs Once per turn for the Summoning a Rock-Type thing, because otherwise you could just insta-swarm your opponent and win, which isn't good considering this card's level, it's already unbalanced by the fact that it has no drawbacks. I'd suggest adding one, it's up to you what it'd be, it is your card. =P The picture, holo, and name are great. The Set ID isn't good, it lacks EN, and these days, there are ALWAYS 4 letters before the dash in the Set ID, proof of this is shown by duelist packs and dark revelation packs. They used to be DP# and DR#, now theey're DP0# and DR0#. Fix it up and it's good. ^_^ Congrats on 6 stars, I remember when you got your 4th and 5th. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Thanks Dark Edo Phoenix. I knew the OCG was a little off. But I was really unsure about the effect. I'll edit it now with a drawback. I don't really give a damn about ID, it stands for, S=Spire's F= Fivethousand-post C-Celebration, I'll add an extra letter though. Yeah, I remember you too. Thanks alot for your help, i'll edit it now. +repped. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 I didn't spot that OCG error...I'll 1v1 you in due time.I can't wait to see more cards of yours, maybe you can make more cards like this, make it Epic/10 x2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 1st-Congratulations on 5000 posts!!!2nd-Really nice card.Original effect,nice holo,but do what Dark Edo Phoenix said. 10/10 ;)3rd-You have so many 1 - on - 1 challenges,...I have only 2 or 3,...Good for you!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arvinalverde Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 wow! what a wonderful card!,i really liked the picture and the effect!,10/10!great job!, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Awsome card dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 10/10 Perfect. Congratz Spire! I personally think there should be more Rock types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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