RETURN OF DARKNESS MY 1st OFFICIAL CARDS

[kazuki01]

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I am Proudly to Post the 1st Card of my Return of Darkness(RODR) set.

 

I hope you all enjoy viewing it...

 

Image Cred/Link

 

[spoiler=Made possible with]

Image HOLO by tetraslash

BOOSTER PACK by noahyel

 

[spoiler=RETURN OF DARKNESS]

 

 

[spoiler=CARD EFFECT]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if you exactly have 10 DARK or Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, put 5 Calamity Counters on this card. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 600 for every Calamity Counters on this card. When this card destroys a monster in battle, put 1 Calamity Counter on this card. When your opponent activates a Spell, Trap or Monster Card effect or Summons a monster, by removing 1 Calamity Counter on this card, you can negate the activation of the card or Summon of the monster and remove it from play.

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[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

OCG Corrections:

 

2nd Sentence: This card can not be Special Summoned unless you have exactly 10 DARK or Spellcaster-Type monsters in your Graveyard.

4th Sentence: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by an amount equal to the number of "Calamity Counters" on this card x 600.

6th Sentence: When your opponent activates a card effect or Summons a monster, you can remove 1 "Calamity Counter" from this card to negate the effect or Summon and remove that card(s) from play.

 

Calamity Counter(s)="Calamity Counter(s)"

 

Suggestion:

Each time this card attacks, it loses 1 "Calamity Counter."

 

O by the way, thanks for the credit!

[StevenBray]

OCG:

1 - This card can not be Special Summoned except when you have exactly 10 DARK or Spellcaster-Type monsters in your Graveyard.

2 - Increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the number of Calamity Counters on this card x600.

3 (suggestion) - You need to put a maximum number of Counters that the card can have, otherwise if there is a card that puts as many Counters on a card as possible (not sure if there is, but could be eventually), this card would end up with Infinite Counters on it, and this Infinite ATK and DEF and Infinite destructive potential.

 

Pic is alright, but overused and I'm not a huge fan of Holofication on any card. Effect is alright and it is nice to see that you expand to Spellcasters instead of just DARK.

 

Card Rating: 7/10 - OCG corrections needed, and the infinite counters thing I mentioned above is a bit of a concern. Not a bad though

[Bloodrun]