LiAM Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 [align=center]Here is the card:[spoiler=[color=#6B8E23]EFFECT[/color]:]This card cannot be destroyed by battle excpet for a FIRE attribute monster (damage calculation is applied normally). When this card is summoned, place 1 counter on each monster on your Opponents field. Once per turn, place 1 counter on each monster on your Opponents field. During your Main Phase, you can remove any number of counters to deal damage to your opponents Life Points x300. -I wasn't to sure about the OCG, as it does get repetative, so if you would like to correct it feel free :D Image credit: ( http://www.godzillatemple.com/hidden/gmovie17.jpg ) Rate/ Hate/ Comment[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Seems pretty good. It can probably deal a nice amount of damage to players who don't use any FIRE attribute monsters, probably an average build of 600 damage per turn (As I usually see opponents having around 2 monsters). The ATK may be low, but I could see people playing this facedown to have it flip face-up in defense position and be kind of tricky to remove while it constantly causes burn. Definetely seems like there's some OCG problems, which again, I'm not the best at correcting. Perhaps to make it shorter, you could give it a sort of Just Desserts wording, and just have the burn effect occur when it's summoned and once per turn. (Unless you wanted it to have the ability to remove spell counters too). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 [align=center]lengthy description and i take your advice onboard. and yep, its meant to do that, i started it off at 500 per counter, but hte n thought it was too much. do you like my presentation skills? :lol:[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 neat card. ocg is a little wrong but it is still cool. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 [align=center]thanks :D im currently maknig anohter card, im gunna stick a gold sticker on it and make it really cool :D look our for it![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Don't capitalize opponents, Summoned, FIRE monster, take out attribute, use inflict instead of deal, good pic. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 [align=center] *salutes* thanks [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Ok card, OCG errors pointed out, dislike the pic, 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Summoned, opponent's, inflict instead of deal, attribute needs to be removed, FIRE monster, good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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