New Sig - 3 Versions - First Shot at this style - Problematica Please Help

[+Jono]

I know it's probably horrible but:

 

V1:

 

V2:

 

V3:

 

It took me awhile to make and I know that the right side is kinda bland, that's why I tried to fill it with the static and the text. I posted three versions at different stages. CnC please.

[Seta]

They're really nice =D

[Cyber Altair]

It is, first version is the only decent one =P

 

dumb shape for a tag to start with =\

 

lacks a lot of basics and sheet like that imo =P

[D-Striker]

2 is the best, not that great though.

[Miazo]

2 is best!

[Spire]

Yes, i'd say V2 is the best also.

[Kizzi]

V1 is the best and that's not up for discussion

MY EYES

Too sharp and ripple-ish and the lighting is weird, especially at the topleft

[Hioco]

Not bad... But give the sprite some of the effect...

[-DG-]

sprite itself looks a little, just a bit bright to me.

 

Excellent use of GFX designing, however, the edge on v.3 is a little funny looking to me.

 

Not too bad, however

[+Jono]

Thanks Everyone ^^

 

 

It is' date=' first version is the only decent one =P

 

dumb shape for a tag to start with =\

 

lacks a lot of basics and s*** like that imo =P

[/quote']

 

I thought you'd say the first was the best. As for the shape, I just followed the tut and used a clipping mask. I know it lacks a lot of basics, I just followed the tut and left out a few things that I couldn't do.

 

V1 is the best and that's not up for discussion

MY EYES

Too sharp and ripple-ish and the lighting is weird' date=' especially at the topleft

[/quote']

 

Sharp and Ripple-ish = What the tut said to do. XD

 

Not bad... But give the sprite some of the effect...

 

Like I said, I just followed the tut.

[Kizzi]

Thanks Everyone ^^

 

 

It is' date=' first version is the only decent one =P

 

dumb shape for a tag to start with =\

 

lacks a lot of basics and s*** like that imo =P

[/quote']

 

I thought you'd say the first was the best. As for the shape, I just followed the tut and used a clipping mask. I know it lacks a lot of basics, I just followed the tut and left out a few things that I couldn't do.

 

V1 is the best and that's not up for discussion

MY EYES

Too sharp and ripple-ish and the lighting is weird' date=' especially at the topleft

[/quote']

 

Sharp and Ripple-ish = What the tut said to do. XD

 

Not bad... But give the sprite some of the effect...

 

Like I said' date=' I just followed the tut.

[/quote']

 

Link me to the tutorial plz?

There's 3 possibilities here:

a) You used bad judgement.

b) You skipped vital step(s).

c) The tut is bloody terrible.

[+Jono]

I can't remember where I found it, sorry, I just followed it. The results it showed looked pretty damn good actually, so it's probably just me.