RixMaadi Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Pic from: http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/insect_elemental.jpg I think it's understandable, but might not be perfect OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 That's a nice card. The guys who gave you the rep are right. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Nice pic and effect. 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Dont mind me ^_^ - Image seems to look as if it does not fit correctly into the card frame, perhaps some image measuring and alterations for a better fit, are in order. - Overpowered, instant 3 card Deck-DES, united we stand = 11 card Deck-Des etc. - Last sentence needs changing, 'for every 100 damage inflicted', something along those lines, check my OCG thread if you need basic guidance or such. - Nice attempt, i can see your going along with the Insect Theme of Deck-DES, but try not to make something too powerful, its often the downfall of created cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Thank you very much for the comment Dark Raver. Ya, after making this card, I had felt that it could be a bit overpowered. It will probably only be able to do 1 hit, but I can see on how you're able to just play it at the right time for a finisher. I guess the ability to attack directly is the main thing that pushes this, or being a non-tribute that you can just play and go off. Though, most deckout decks I've seen try to win with stalling and flip effects like Needle Worm. Most decks that run equips usually win right away by attacking the life points like Ben-Kei. I suppose some hybrid of the two could break this card easily, especially since attacking directly makes it a lot easier to bypass things then attacking life points multiple times. Probably could have been balanced with making it a tribute monster or increasing the increments by a bit more, like 300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 I like the fact you take both positive and negative comments and embrace them, think over them, and come to sensible conclusions. Its often with low posted members, that you get a 'OMGZ YOU DISSED MY CARD' comment ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 I used to be that way on the MTG forums though, years ago when I joined them. After a while of making cards, it's easier to see comments and not feel like people are against you, but are actually trying to help you. I decided to join this forum to practice making Yugioh cards, just to change things up a bit. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Thats good to know ^_^ Hope you enjoy and use the forums more, would have been easier for you to make cards if you posted more around your joining date, when images were free for all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 WOW 10/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 "increment?" That's a new term used for a Yu Gi oh card! Nice! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 @Dark Raver I suppose it would have been easier, but I'm not really having trouble finding pics at the moment, even with the limitations. Again, thank you and everyone else for all the comments so far. @ cAde2009 I think I remember seeing the term "increment" on a Yugioh card before. I just don't remember which.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Do you want me to put your card on my website? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Do you want me to put your card on my website? That's....Odd to ask 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Excellent pic and effect. 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 What do you mean by that, jackmoonward? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Do you want me to put your card on my website? That's....Odd to ask 9/10 why is that odd?You know i can put cards on my site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Do you want me to put your card on my website? That's....Odd to ask 9/10 why is that odd?You know i can put cards on my site. Yes YOUR cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 The last effect should have something like a Maximum of 500 Life Points. Otherwise, great Card, and Awesome for a Beginner :D-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Do you want me to put your card on my website? That's....Odd to ask 9/10 why is that odd?You know i can put cards on my site. Yes YOUR cardsbut i can change them!all i need is to copy his card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 9.5/10. I would give a 10/10, but the picture just does not seem right, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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