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Monkeybuoy2's Splice Set (as of now)


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Not bad. You need to work on some of the outlines.(Red outline on yellow and green? Brown on green?) Only use black or the darkest color in the spectrum of the section you're outlining.(Your Elecrivire splice, Dark green on green) On some of your splices,(the Regis, for instance) the outlining is great.

Also needs some work on some of the recolors.(The Absol splice and the Elecrivire splice)

Keep it up!

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@Twisted: What is wrong with those two? Please tell me because I can take any help I can get

 

@Killer: Wow! Thank you! You made a splice slideshow for me!

 

The Electrive one: Please select a color scheme that looks good together, it looks horrible with green, red, and yellow.

 

The Tortera one: you need to recolor the 'legs', the brown ruins them.

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I'm going to pick and choose your things since I don't want to critique all of them.

 

The full Eeve mix is nice in some ways, bad in other. Unlike too many Eevee mixes, it's not over cluttered. The problems it ahs though are mainly with colors and borders. On the Jolteon spikey mane there are little gray squars all over, probably left over from Jolteon. There is still some green on the Leafeon tail. The left ear, our left, doesn't look right either.

 

The Darkria+Crobat+Hitmonchan+etc... needs a good amount of touch up also. Again you neglected border recoloring, a major but much too common flaw that really brings down the qualaty in my opinon. Another issue is the shading you did. On the gloves, you go from light, dark, to medium. It should go light, medium, to dark. The skirt thing is badly place too, the dark energy coming out doesn't look right. The smokey bottom part's shading is very off also, and there are gray parts too. The pink doesn't work.

 

Weavile+Sycther isn't too bad. I do notice though you have some tails added, from one of the psychic trio. On the top right wing though, you have some very oddly light shaded borders. The tails are also a bit pale in color. Look down at the tails I also see a misplaced pixel.

 

The Registeel one is pretty impressive, you made something original looking. Sadly you once again neglected some border colors, and there is shading off on those leg bands.

 

Regirock is also nice. An issue I have with it is the arm canon. The spike fins are cool, but shading is off on the right one and the top one. Doing just a copy and flip will do that. You usually have to reshade it at this point, the borders should also be reshaded too.

 

The blood rose one is pretty ugly I'd have to say. That shade of red does not go good at all with it. The black color doesn't even work that well. Shading and everything just seem all jarbled up.

 

Seaking+Kyogre is ok, but you made one very huge that isn't border issues, even though you did do that too. You messed up shading order. On it's head, there is all that blue, but it should the lighter shade of blue. The find on the left, our left, also doesn't look right, along with the tail.

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