Joe.King Posted November 21, 2008 Report Share Posted November 21, 2008 My first card, Agent of Punishment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Sure. I'll say this is fair. Let me try the old grading system I made from way back when: Visuals: Important, they are. The picture for your "Agent" is a bit twisted, he looks like he's been twisted and molded. Kid of strange... I say you could have cropped this picture a little better to make him look less deranged. No circulation is good, but your ID Tag is blank as well. Make an ID, it doesn't matter what it is, but it should look authentic (this is the "Realistic Cards" Forum anyway). AOPS-EN001 is fine (stands for "Agent Of Punishment Single). And what's that writing in the background?Grade: B+ OCG/Editing: "While"="If" in this case. Also, change all "on your side of the field" statements to "you control" statements. For example, your first statement is "...there is a Level 3 or lower monster on your side of the field..." while it should be "...you control a Level 3 or lower monster". Do that for the statement as well. One more problem, don't capitalize "Of" in your monster's card name. "of" and "the" aren't usually capitalized (unless you've got a monster called "The adjective-goes-here noun-goes-here" like "The Great Splurge". Then "the" would be capitalized).Grade: B- Balance/Technique:This baby is almost as balanced as Shadi's Millenium Scale. Very nice job here, especially for a first-time creation. Your stats aren't too high on this guy, and it's effect matches it neatly. Technique is the second word here, though, and it also covers originality. For a single, you are doing a neat job in helping out a strategy (Level 3 and below support) that isn't too strong, isn't too well-known, and you're doing it with a card whose effect doesn't even support itself. A good idea for a first card. Definately deserving a high score here.Grade: A+ Average Grade: B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Thanks, i'll take the advice next time I make a card.I've fixed the card. And here it is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Beautiful. I love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Thanks. Should he be Warrior, Fiend or Zombie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 attacked = selected as an attack target______________________________________ Effect looks kinda basic. Try adding to it. ^_^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 "DeMeNTeD", I thought that was old OCG? He should be a Warrior-Type. No doubt about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Yup. He was actually designed for something else other than this, then I found YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 2 Things. Good Card For A newb! wow Pic Could Be Better Tho. Also in your sig is't that fusion monster a pic of a weird samus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 No: 1 He's in a kicking pose, albeit a strange poseNo: 2 no, i got the image from MTG staples.BTW, who's samus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 A Charactter Of A game Dnt Worry Tho...But I'll Send You A pic That Could be better but still it's ok just A bit too Cartoony thats all (maybe like a pic OF DA but still It might not)Also The Picture Has Writing at the vback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Yes, the writing says KING OF FIGHTERS "99 or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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