Shocked Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 This is my Chaos Army SetPlease Rate and Comments I got all of this pic in the God War Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 You got some good ideas, go to the "OCG/Grammar Thread" for some help writing your text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Okay, thanks for the tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chinotornes Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Yeah, your OCG needs help and your pics could use some cropping to remove the black bits from the bottom. They are good though. 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Thank you very much for the tipsAnd I add some Chaos Army cards again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 The first thing you get is an F for Fail. I see 1ST EDITION, yet no gold stickers. Last time I checked, all cards had gold stickers if they were 1ST EDITION. Either add gold stickers or remove the circulation. Moving on :), "Lightning Coterus" and "Fire Hell Knight" wouldn't work. You see, the chances of having 1 of them on the field and then Normal Summoning another quickly (I say quickly because they have low stats) would be nearly impossible. That kind of chance hardly ever happens. But they'd make some nice fluff cards (every set needs a few).Your "Grunt Variant" Monsters are overpowered... they could gain too much ATK and DEF too fast."Cave Monster" needs 2 more levels and 100 less ATK. "Burning Statue" has too much DEF, lower it to something like 2000. Both of these cards have, while balanced, not very useful strategies."Haunted Skeleton King" and "Cannibalist Puppy" are overpowered. Have you seen "Nobleman-Eater Bug"? Look at it for an example of a balanced FLIP-destruction card. "Cannibalist Puppy" might actually work if you decreases its DEF to 400-500 and made it destroy 2 monsters on your side of the field too (or if you can't destroy monsters, pay 1000 Life Points for each monster), not including "Cannibalist Puppy". "Viper Cerebrus" seems to have the same problem as your puppy, not enough drawbacks for such a powerful effect. By the way, what's a Human-Type Monster?"Three Heads Cannibalist Cerebrus" is far too hard to summon, has far too low stats, and bears an effect that helps almost no one... I still don't know what a Human-Type is. I see the most potential in "Cave Monster" and "Burning Statue". They look cool and I'd enjoy seeing them as a duo-set, not included with the rest of these guys... man, blue flame... wicked. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Whoa! Thank you very much for the tips, N00B!I hope it can help me to repair my cardsThanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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