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Caldera Helio NEW HOLO VERSION


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I'll rewrite this, bolding everything that needed correction:

"If this card battles with another monster, at the end of the Battle Phase, you may Special Summon 1 EARTH Monster with an ATK of 1000 or less from your Deck to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. Then shuffle your Deck. When an EARTH Monster you control is destroyed, inflict 500 Points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

That's a lot of bolding... sorry, but you need to work on your phrasing. Your spelling and caps abilities are good enough, but phrasing is a must.

However, I love the picture!, and the idea's fine (I think I can see some abuse with mass summoning though..) Overall, I appreciate the visuals the most. You did well making this a Secret Rare. :mrgreen:

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we've all found that.

 

No offense dude, but shut up. Your spamming a lot in this thread for no apparent reason. Spamming is against the rules.

 

As for the cards, the pic is epic win.

 

Noob Hunter pointed out all of your OCG and grammar errors so I have no more to say.

 

Great job.

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