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[Kale] The Fair Maiden of Lust


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[align=center]:Introduction:

Hello All! some of you may know me from the past, others may not have a clue. But for the past month i havnt been on this site very much. That is partially because of school, but really the true reason is because i have lost interest. Not complete interest, but enough to make this site not rule my life. The internet isnt everything, you know.

As a result of my absence i have let my set, the Allies, and my fan fiction, Edge of Justice, and my Shop, Tersus Effercio, relatively die. For all of you who hold some sort of grudge or hard feelings against me for that, i am sorry. for all of you readers who want to know what happens in Edge of Justice, please say so. i dont know how many readers i have left, so if you are a true fan, please put "Bring Edge of Justice Back!" in your sig, or something. Thank you.

 

 

 

:Card Origin:

This card was inspired truly from looking at the image. Thank you Wolfberserker for the great art. For those of you who dont know, Wolf is a great person on the forum. He has a stickied thread in the Showcase Section of the forum with brilliant art. i have used his personal art on about half of my Allies. Without his art i dont think i could have been as successful as i was with them. Thank you very much, my friend.

 

 

 

:The Fair Maiden of Lust:

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:Lore:

This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by Releasing 1 Warrior-Type Monster you control. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 2, you can pay 800 Life Points to add 1 Tuner Monster in your Deck to your hand. Destroy a 3000 ATK or higher Monster this card attacks at the beginning of the Damage Step. If this card is in your Graveyard, you can Release 1 Tuner Monster you control to Special Summon this card in Attack Position.

 

 

 

:Card Art:

As stated, this is from Wolfberserker. For more, please refer to the "Card Origins" section of this thread.

 

 

 

:Notes:

This card allows for a lot of different plays. For one, you can get rid of a monster you no longer need to summon it, or better yet you can get rid of an opponent's warrior that you stole! Then you can reinforce your Tuning abilities for a relatively small cost of 800 LP. This card can have some sort of a 'Bomber' type of effect against RDA and others who have a ginormous attack, the only problem is that she is destroyed in the process. That is where the last effect comes in. She can be resurrected with the release of a tuner, even the one you added to your hand the turn before!

For best results, use with the Tuner Monster Plaguespreader Zombie. You can release the tuner to bring her back, then bring back PZ with his own effect and Synchro into a level 8.

 

 

 

:OCG Usage:

Yes, i know that i used terms such as Release. This is because i like this OCG, and i believe that the US should have adopted it. it makes more sense than 'tributing', and it sounds cooler. plus, every time i write 'tributing' it says that that word doesnt exist. :|

 

 

 

:Complainers:

For those of you that are going to complain about something in my thread, whether it be about the card or otherwise, please have something meaningful to say. This means that if you dont like the OCG, please provide a way to fix it. I cannot trust that it is bad if you cannot write it any better.

 

 

 

:Closing:

Thank you all for looking at this thread. I hope you enjoyed the card, and any reps or points that you wish to give me out of this is very appreciated.

 

 

 

:Fixes/Edits:

Thank you Killey for pointing out a very big error that went unnoticed until the second page of comments. i really do appreciate that. because of his scrutiny, i have changed the wording of the effect from "end of the Damage Step" to "beginning of the Damage Step". This allows the effect to go off without a weird loop. ;)

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Nice card. SO release means Sacrifice.

 

thanks. and yeeeesssss it dooooeessss. thank you for repeating what i already said in the post... ^_^

 

oh' date=' sorry, but awesome card!!

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thank you! ^_^

 

:Note:

you guys, usually when people write things they intend them to be read... read the post so you know what is going on, dont just skip to the card. ;)

 

^words of wisdom.^

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This is a very balanced card. "The Undead Fair Maiden of Lust" would probably be better because she comes back from the grave. I shall give you a +1rep for the creation of the card. There are no OCG errors that I can see except for the part where you changed "tribute" to "release", which I like your way better and completely agree with you that America should have adopted it. This is some of the best inspiration from art I have ever seen. Good luck with making cards like this one in the future.

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This is a very balanced card. "The Undead Fair Maiden of Lust" would probably be better because she comes back from the grave. I shall give you a +1rep for the creation of the card. There are no OCG errors that I can see except for the part where you changed "tribute" to "release"' date=' which I like your way better and completely agree with you that America should have adopted it. This is some of the best inspiration from art I have ever seen. Good luck making cards like this one in the future.

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wow, thanks. ;)

 

i would have added "Undead" to the title, but it would have gotten too long. and it would have had too many adjectives to sound good.. So it shall remain unchanged.

 

Thank you for the +rep, i really appreciate it. ^_^

 

thank you for your compliments. most of the cards i make are inspiration from art, actually. ^_^

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This is a very balanced card. "The Undead Fair Maiden of Lust" would probably be better because she comes back from the grave. I shall give you a +1rep for the creation of the card. There are no OCG errors that I can see except for the part where you changed "tribute" to "release"' date=' which I like your way better and completely agree with you that America should have adopted it. This is some of the best inspiration from art I have ever seen. Good luck making cards like this one in the future.

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wow, thanks. ;)

 

i would have added "Undead" to the title, but it would have gotten too long. and it would have had too many adjectives to sound good.. So it shall remain unchanged.

 

Thank you for the +rep, i really appreciate it. ^_^

 

thank you for your compliments. most of the cards i make are inspiration from art, actually. ^_^

 

You are welcome. I do think you are correct about the change of tribute to release, and that you shouldn't change the name of the card because it was only a suggestion.

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This is a very balanced card. "The Undead Fair Maiden of Lust" would probably be better because she comes back from the grave. I shall give you a +1rep for the creation of the card. There are no OCG errors that I can see except for the part where you changed "tribute" to "release"' date=' which I like your way better and completely agree with you that America should have adopted it. This is some of the best inspiration from art I have ever seen. Good luck making cards like this one in the future.

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wow, thanks. ;)

 

i would have added "Undead" to the title, but it would have gotten too long. and it would have had too many adjectives to sound good.. So it shall remain unchanged.

 

Thank you for the +rep, i really appreciate it. ^_^

 

thank you for your compliments. most of the cards i make are inspiration from art, actually. ^_^

 

You are welcome. I do think you are correct about the change of tribute to release, and that you shouldn't change the name of the card because it was only a suggestion.

 

well, that change wasnt my idea... that was how it would have been before the Duelist Genesis pack if it would have transferred over from Japan. we didnt change it.. big deal. ^_^ i would have liked it better. it rolls off the tongue better than tributing. :D

 

thank you for the suggestion. it allows me to know that you actually read the card.. ^_^

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10/10

sweet card kale

glad to see ur online

 

thanks. ^_^ glad to be back' date=' actually.

 

10000/10 Awesome Card...

 

Now only if Konami people read this...

 

yeah, it would be a sweet card to have...

 

****i reserve the right to have the first copy... ^_^

 

Monster = monster (I think)

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I like it. It seems to work very well with tuners. ^_^

 

9/10

 

yeeeeahh... that is the one part of OCG that always gets me. oh well, now i just have a bigger 'M'. ^_^

 

thanks for the rating, my friend.

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Pretty balanced card. You could attack Blue Eyes White Dragon with her' date=' and then bring her back to the field by sacraficing a Tuner. I like it, 9/10

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im glad you like it! :D it makes me real happy that you guys like this card... i feel that i am getting a bit rusty at making cards though.

 

what do ya guys think? ^_^

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Picture: 9/10

Effect: 9/10

Overall Idea 10/10 (because of the effort put into the lore and extra details about the card ;) )

 

Total: 9/10

 

thank you for that rating! from that i can tell that you will become a soon well-respected member. ;)

 

thanks for rating!

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Cool card Kale, and welcome back. XD! I stopped for a while with the cardmaking and started my animations. It seemed like when I got back, I couldn't even use my OCG. Not to mention that people I knew had left, and People that left befor were back (i.e. "Meti")

Welcome back! and really, I like your card.

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