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My Ledgendary Pokemon Set Pt. 1


ShurikenNinja1

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Good cards, and I concur with Crazymanguy4 that the art is quite nice. The effects of the various trainers are also interesting. That said, I hope you don't mind if I go over a few nitpicks:

 

- "Arceus, King of Pokemon" looks like he should be a Ritual Monster.

 

- Regarding the effect of "Arceus, King of Pokemon", you should find a way of marking your monsters so that it is clear that they are Pokemon and eligible targets of Arceus' effect. When making pop culture cards, you need to be sure that people who have never heard of what you're referencing will know what exactly the cards will do without having to guess at anything.

 

- This also goes somewhat for cards like your "Dialga's Roar of Time". You need to specifically specify "Dialga - King of Time" or possibly 'a monster with "Dialga" in its name' if you have potential plans to make more than one version of Dialga.

 

- There are OCG errors. I'm not going to go any deeper into that, as there is already a thread for that kinda thing.

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  • 7 months later...

no offense dude but the names suck i'm new at this but the names are bad and some cards dont make any sense at all i really like yu gi oh and i think that every card that they make here are awesome but those cards suck if you change the name and the effect they would be awesome

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