evermember Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 i hope this is ok this is my first try at this so yea look at it and tell me what yea think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 OCG/grammar fix: "When this card is Summoned, send all cards on the field to the Graveyard (except this card). This card gains 500 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard." This card is overpowered, mostly because of the first part of the effect. Maybe change 500 to 100. I like the picture though, not bad for a first try. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 wayyy too overpowered. Ocg errors 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evermember Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 fixed it to make it more fare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Getting better, but either lower the ATK or change 500 to 100 or 200. Also use my OCG fix ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Me and Kallan are working on a OCG guide just for newbs like yourself. It will REVOLUTIONIZE YCM Other than that, it's a good card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evermember Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 third time is the charm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 YES! AWESOME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 now that's betta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evermember Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(CC) Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyle_is_coolness Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 if you want to make an cool card make the atk/def ???? so that no monster can kill it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chinotornes Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 ^ don't listen to the nOOb^. that is the best card i have seen a nOOb make in a while. even though it took a bit of coaching. not op'ed. good ocgi like it 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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