serenamidori Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 I made my first card after seeing this one: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yu-Jo_Friendship Please rate and help me make it better! <33 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 this card is lame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Just to clarify, it's not magic card, it's Spell card Next off, the second effect is useless. There is no way your opponent would refuse a handshake knowing that they would have all their monsters removed and take damage for each one. Also, 3000 is way too much for both players to gain, with no backdraw or anything. especially if you had a card that made your opponent loose it instead of gaining (i.e. Bad Reaction or Nurse Refecule) Finally, the pic isn't the greatest. In addition, you need picture credit. And, for the circulation, it can't be limited edition inless it has a gold sticker in the corner. Many shops on the site will do this for you. Overall, the card needs work. It was a good attempt for a beginner, but, could be much improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serenamidori Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Just to clarify' date=' it's not magic card, it's Spell card Next off, the second effect is useless. There is no way your opponent would refuse a handshake knowing that they would have all their monsters removed and take damage for each one. Also, 3000 is way too much for both players to gain, with no backdraw or anything. especially if you had a card that made your opponent loose it instead of gaining (i.e. Bad Reaction or Nurse Refecule) Finally, the pic isn't the greatest. In addition, you need picture credit. And, for the circulation, it can't be limited edition inless it has a gold sticker in the corner. Many shops on the site will do this for you. Overall, the card needs work. It was a good attempt for a beginner, but, could be much improved.[/quote']Well thanks for telling me all that! As I said, I'm new to this, and I have seen Spell and Magic, so I wasn't clear on what to use. And as for the effect, I know it's pretty stupid to have the second one. I did this pretty quickly. I'll have to re-do this all and rethink the effect.What would be a good amount for the life points? I have no clue. Also, nice to know your opinion about the pic. I threw it together really quickly, so I guess it wouldn't look the best. I had no idea about the Limited Edition thing. I just copied it off of the Yu-Jo Friendship card. Thanks for the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(CC) Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 work on it ALLOT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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