ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 This is my first posted card, hope you like it. [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 For ur first I would say 7/10As a not first card 5/10keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted November 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 Thanks man I'll try better next time, but what can I do to inprove my card ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 OCG isn't good:normal summoned= Normal Summonedlight - attribute monster=LIGHT monstersuneffected=not effectedcard effects=spells, traps or monster effectsmain phase=Main phaseone=1graveyard=Graveyard Also overpowering. So because of this and the distorted pic 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chinotornes Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 ^there's the OCG corrections^ the pic is a little blurry and it is very op'ed. Try making some cards that are strong but don't be tempted to go over 3000 unless it is completely nessecary (which it isn't usually) because many ppl don't like really strong cards no matter how fun they can be to make. However for a 1st card it is very good so 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted November 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 Thanks for your reply but I want to Know to make my signature apear because only the URL is appearing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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