DAB - Doom and Beyond Set {New Cards - Charcoal Beasts!}

[Snitch]

Welcome to my second set, my first one didn't turn out as well as it was rather overused, with a LOT of OCG mistakes and such. Well, I threw in that towel, and decided to make a set with a different idea and less used pictures and card effects. Good or no? Nonetheless, you're here now, and you can't leave till you've looked at the cards AND left a comment. Muhahahahahaha. >.>

 

Lore ~ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by tributing two monsters while 'The Dark Hollow' is on the field. Once per turn, by tributing one normal monster on your side of the field, this card gains 500 ATK & DEF.

 

Holo Version of Acuura.

 

Lore ~ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by tributing two Machine monsters on your side of the field while 'The Dark Hollow' is face-up on the field. During your main phase, you may flip a coin. If heads, destroy a monster on your opponents side of the field. If tails, destroy one monster on your side of the field. This effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

Lore ~ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by removing from play two DARK monsters in your graveyard while 'The Dark Hollow' is on the field. When this card is summoned this way, place two Hollow Counters on this card (max 3). For every Hollow Counter on this card, increase it's ATK by 100. By removing one Hollow Counter on this card, negate the effect of one Effect Monster on the field.

 

 

If your opponent has 3 or more monsters on the field than you do, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Discard this card from your hand to the Graveyard to add 2 Level 4 or lower 'Charcoal Beast' Monsters from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon one 'Charcoal Beast - Magma Fish' or 'Charcoal Beast - Pyrotoad' from your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed twice in one duel, it is removed from play.

 

 

More cards to come! I may make an actual big set with these.

More cards to come! I may make an actual big set

[Shadow_Striker]

You should probably show the Dark Hollow card here since all of these cards are linked with it. Other than that the cards seem to be pretty good. I would give them around a 6-8 out of 10

[Snitch]

Yea, I'm working on The Dark Hollow card now, just trying to find a decent image for it. -sweatdrop-

 

Heh, never mind. More to come soon.

[Snitch]

News - The Dark Hollow card is now up!

 

Any more rates please? =/

 

Bump.

[K.B. strategist]

Tributing

2, not two

1, not one or a

Normal Monster

get rid of the commas after "This card cannot be Special Summoned"

can, not may

Main Phase

Graveyard

Summoned

each, not every

"whilst", though a nice word, is not included in ocg

 

^Yes I'm afraid you still have ocg errors. Interesting effects, but not very original. Good pics and ocg isn't that bad.

[Snitch]

Ok, thanks for the improvement ideas. More cards coming later, in school at the moment.

[-DJ-]

Pretty good 8/10

[Snitch]

If you're just gonna give me a number rate, I don't want to hear it.

 

Improvation comments, now that's a different story.

[Snitch]

Bump-de-bump.

 

More cards coming in a min, I has a new Archtype idea for my set.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

If your stating a monster type in the effect (Machine, warrior, etc.), be sure to add "-Type" to it.

 

Not too bad overall though.

[Snitch]

ENTER NEW ARCHTYPE! =D

 

Only one card so far though. >.<

 

 

Hope you like it, and more to come soon.

[Snitch]

Bump, rates please. =/

[.:|Fallen|:.]

i like them

8/10

[Snitch]

Thanks! ^^

 

Working on some new Charcoal Beasts at the moment, and support banners.

[~Shore]

may=can

same OCG fixes the others said

otherwise, pretty good

[Bloodrun]