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Awesome, yes?

 

Wailclaw

 

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Wailmer + Gliscor

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Koffiter

 

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Koffing + Primeape

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Tyrannion

 

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Salamence + Tyrannitar

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Deoblaze

 

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Moltres + Deoxys

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Deoshock

 

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Zapdos + Rotom + Deoxys

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Deofreeze

 

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Articuno + Deoxys

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More to come, don't worry

 

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Well I was going to take a break from critiquing, but since I'm being called out, guess I'll have to do some =D. Glad to see that I'm expected to come and critique though.

 

Wailmer+Gliscor is pretty shallow. All you did was add the claws on. There is much too little Gliscor in this splice. I also find the red arms to be out of place, the tan color could have been better probably, maybe the blue. One thing you could have done to give more of a Gliscor feeling to this splice would have been giving Gliscor's color to it. The claws also seem a tad too shiny compared to Wailmer's skin.

 

Koffing+Primape has one major flaw I don't like, nothing looks attached. This is because you simple overlapped with everything with the body. The on on the right and probably the leg too on the right should be overlapping the body. The way you did it though it doesn't look like they are coming out of the right spots, almost as if they are being grown from the back. The left leg also looks messed up.

 

Salmance+Tyrantiar like everyone says has too little change. Whatever you did above the eye doesn't look right. I wish I could say more, but I mean, it's too shallow.

 

Fire Deoxys is Ok in concept, but the shading and colors are messed up. The brown borders don't quite match that dark pink like color. The yellow, orange, and dark pink in general don't work well on this splice. The left over blue also seems out of place.

 

Lightning Deoxys seems awkward for the fact that he has no arms or anything. The body shape seems set up in a way that it should have arms, but you just have lightning jettisoning out. Other than that, it seems a little shallow, just a change in arms and color. The green seems out of place.

 

What I presume to be ice Deoxy is a little bit odd for the whole bunch. I get you were trying to mix together the birds with Deoxys, but the others didn't have wings. This one does though, making it the odd one of the bunch. The wings and tail don't seem to match the body much. The green on the face and stuff seems out of place as well.

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