New cards made and a new type

[Wolfbat Master]

[Force_Flex]

"Sad Girl" the name is kinda a rip-off of "The Unhappy Maiden", but its still a good effect. I think you should make the lv 3 because of the effect... 8/10

[vampire's fangs]

there prett cool i like the pics, also the ocg is really good onn all cards. lastly weres dont rule our world only vampires do and there coming...

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sry i forgot to rate it i rate it :::::::. (see my sig for my rating)

[Brendano Harns]

The rules of the Realistic Card forum states that there are to be no new types/ attributes of cards, that is what the Other Cards section is for. ;) Also, multiple cards like this would fall under the catagory of Card/sets section, and If I were you, that is what I would have a MOD move it too. ;) As for the cards themselves, they are very good, however, there are multiple OCG errors. But, I guess that that is expected out of a 1 star. NO OFFENSE. Here is what they should say:

 

As long as you control another Plant-Type monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

 

This card cannot declare an attack. This card cannot be selected as an attack target.

 

ATK/? DEF/? ~When this card is Tribute Summoned, remove from play a number of cards from your opponent's Graveyard, until you remove from play a Spell or Trap Card. This card's original ATK and DEF are equal to the combined level of the monsters removed from play by this effect, x500.

 

I changed the effect on the last one slightly, but you could change it to this if you really wanted to:

 

ATK/? DEF/? ~When this card is Tribute Summoned, remove from play a number of cards from your opponent's Graveyard, until you remove from play a Spell or Trap Card. This card's original ATK and DEF are equal to the combined ATK and DEF of the monsters removed from play by this effect.

 

Good Job! :mrgreen:

 

PS, the ATK on the first card should be this: ATK/ 0

[Raelen]

Plant Queen? I don't know about the new type. I'd make it Spellcaster-type

[.:|Fallen|:.]

a new type isnt a realistic card

is it

7.4 on the card

[Snitch]

Limited editions should have a recoloured gold sticker in the bottom right. Queen of Flowers should have ATK/ 0 rather than 000, and the Sad Girl shouldn't be a tuner if it's level 1 with that good effect. Also, there should be a space between the / and the word Tuner in the types, and another space before the / and after Spellcaster. Kazuki Takahashi did not create the bottom card for sure, and that card (Magician Eatos) is also hugely overpowered. What if your opponents graveyard is populated by ONLY monsters with high ATK and your opponents field is empty? OP ALERT.

 

I don't like the new type, considering you won't get a large amount of "Plant Queens" to populate a whole type. Stick with Plant. It should also be "Plant-Type" in the Queen's lore. It's effect is also kind of useless whilst it has no ATK, give it around 800 or so instead. Therefore, while a Plant-Type monster is on your side of the field the Queen can actually do something decent with her "can't be attacked" effect.

 

The Sad Girl's effect should perhaps be replaced with "This card isn't destroyed by battle.", otherwise NOTHING can get past it except Spell & Traps. Maybe make it the Spellcasters Spirit Reaper, if you get me.

 

Also, that white bar underneath the pic of Magician Eatos kind of ruins the pic.

 

I don't do number ratings.

[Jericho]

We don't take kindly to new types around here?

[vampire's fangs]

no we dont not on realistic type

[Brendano Harns]

good, point, and the cards are original and creative, so c'mon people, let us all remember that we are on the YCM forums to help others with their card making skills, not the gallows to execute a prisoner. ;)

 

Let us also kep in mind that this is a newbie, so let us not be TOO harsh. A good balance of harshness, critque, and friendliness=a better card maker. :D

[vampire's fangs]

ya we should go light he is a n00b oh and welcome n00b (get used to the name a lot of ppl use that name 4 1 stars)

[megakenny]

u should just make the plant queen one just plant it's the same thing

 

but apart from that kwl cards 8.5/10

[Jericho]

that was supposed to be a period. as in a statement. as in we don't take kindly. i still don't take kindly.

[DuelingDude2]

Very good. If next time you could crop pics that would make you cards soooo much better.

 

8.95/10

[Brendano Harns]

No offense, but...no one cares. ;)

This person is obviously new at this, but has potential. You can tell Sosalvador is not going to infest the YCM forums with spa, shouldn't we at least be thnkfl for that? You can also tell he/she is trying to make cards that are original, and not rip offs of ones already created. How about that? Does anyone else think that is good? There have been to many annoying n00bs here lately, but you can tell that this one is a n00b that will not be one to spam countlessly, as well as infecting the minds of other n00bs to spam and tic off the MODS. I predict that if people continue to post things harshly like that to n00bs, that is exactly what they will turn into. We cannot afford more spammers.

 

~Fuzzie

[Wolfbat Master]

No offense' date=' but...no one cares. ;)

This person is obviously new at this, but has potential. You can tell Sosalvador is not going to infest the YCM forums with spa, shouldn't we at least be thnkfl for that? You can also tell he/she is trying to make cards that are original, and not rip offs of ones already created. How about that? Does anyone else think that is good? There have been to many annoying n00bs here lately, but you can tell that this one is a n00b that will not be one to spam countlessly, as well as infecting the minds of other n00bs to spam and tic off the MODS. I predict that if people continue to post things harshly like that to n00bs, that is exactly what they will turn into. We cannot afford more spammers.

 

~Fuzzie

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Thanks for the words of kindness because with some other cards i made they weren't really nice on the comments.:D

[Brendano Harns]

Your welcome. ;)