Joker Jake 95 Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 Hey look at this card and give me any tips on how i could improve it. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 Add a comma after turn, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster, add where from, grammar problems with the 2nd effect. Good pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 can, not maySpecial Summon1, not oneDragon-Typeget rid of the word "also"2, not twoTribute, not sacrificeMonster Card Bad ocg, Good pic, effect kind of plain, you need to specify where you can Special Summon the Dragon-Type monster from. (hand, Deck, Graveyard...etc.) I would suggest having it be Special Summoned from the hand as anything else would be overpowered. Another idea to both make the effect more complex and to keep it from being overpowered would be to let you Special Summon 1 removed from play Dragon-Type monster by removing 3 counters from the card. You would also have to include conditions stating how to place the counters on this card and an effect that lets you remove from play monsters from your Graveyard for a cost or when specific conditions are met. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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