Nobita Nobi Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Hello, i'm a new member of Yugioh Card Maker, i'm really like yugioh, i always want to make a card, so,i'm really happy when i found this site, and i decided to join in this site. I really want to become a good card maker so i read the rules multiple time before post my first card here. enough with the long talks, here are the first card is made [spoiler=Dark vampire effect:] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This card only can be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 DARK monster you control. If this card is Special Summoned succesfully inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If this card inflict battle damage to your opponent Life Point, increase your Life Point equal than half of damage inflicted by this card. Each time this effect is activated Decrease this card ATK by 200. [spoiler=Dark Gladiator effect ] This card only can be Ritual Summoned by effect of "Gladiator's Helm". If this card is Ritual Summoned succesfully destroy 1 monster on the field. As long this card remain Face-Up on your field increase all DARK monster ATK by 300. If this card destroy a Defense Position monster on your opponent field, inflict 5oo damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 1000 Life Point to add 1 "Gladiator Helm" on your Deck to your Hand. [spoiler=Dark Thunder Spirit Effect] If this card is Tribute Summoned succesfully by Tributing 1 DARK monster, Destroy and remove from play 1 monster on your opponent field. If this card attack a Defense Position monster on your opponent field, Decrease the monster attacked by this card DEF by 500 at damage calculation only. If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 1000 damage to opponent Life Points. [spoiler=Abyss's Effect] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can Be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK monsters you control. If this card is Special Summoned succesfully Swicth Battle Position of all monster on your opponent field. During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card ATK inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your Opponent Life Points. If your opponent activated a Spell or Trap cards that target this card, you can Discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to negate the activation of the Spell and Trap card and Destroy it. more will comingsorry i forgot to add pic credit first card: http://cdimg2.crunchyroll.com/i/spire4/04202008/2/c/a/5/2ca506e4392240_full.jpgsecond card: http://i493.photobucket.com/albums/rr300/lightdiversion/DarkAura.jpgThird card:http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa23/Grave_Digger_Dutch/Fantasy/Fantasy-216.jpgFourth Card: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v505/biohazardsurvivor/Dark%20Ages%20Curse/001_cl.jpgFifth card: http://www.quizilla.com/user_images/P/PS/PSY/psychoticpenguinleader/1132724511_csDevelish.jpgSixth card: http://www.sc2blog.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/archonconcept.jpgSeventh card: http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g35/Abyssal_Chaos/360353165_l.jpgEight Card:http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q167/Deidara-luver/woofie.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Pretty good for your first cards, the picture are a bit overused but that's O.K. for a new member. The OCG/grammar is good, your just missing alot of "s" at the end of words. I can see you read the OCG/grammar thread. battle damage = Battle Damage 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Welcome to YCM! The cards are pretty good, Bengal mentioned the errors like adding 's' at the end of like Life Points. But pretty solid for a newcomer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Pictures are OK, OCG is kinda off and the effects are kinda meh. But very good for your first cards here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 I love them.... I don't have time to read them though XD but the only thing I dont like is the pic in the second one... the words in the middke of the pic.... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobita Nobi Posted November 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 thanks 4 comment: added 5 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Great for a new member!New member rating 7/10Experienced member rating 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Battle Damage decrease face-up hand Damage Calculation____________________ Not too bad. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Hey, lookit! Starcraft 2! :D Awesome cards. :mrgreen: Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Great cardNice!8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 8.5/10 >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobita Nobi Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 I love your cards and welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medicguy2 Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Nice cards for their firsts. 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziberteck Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 a few typos and ocg errors but pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyrnen Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Those are awesome for first cards. They would even be good for cards that you made after a year that you were here. Overall rating: 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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