Some dragon cards I made

[Virlym]

I'm new at this so if I didn't do this right I'm sorry, I'll try to get better. Please tell me how I did. Criticism is appreciated.

Defender Dragon:

art from: http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m112/emberous/Dragon.jpg

 

Shadow:

art from: http://images.elfwood.com/art/s/l/slpruett/dark_elemental_dragon.jpg

(incase u can't read the effect it is: This card gains 1000 ATK on the turn it is summoned. This card can be special summoned if there is a monster with "Dragon" in its name on the field. This card gains 700 ATK for every Dragon- Type monster in your Graveyard when it battles.

 

Vicious Battle Dragon:

art from: http://3drt.com/news/media/blogs/news/dragon-05.jpg

(incase u can't read the effect it is: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

Increase this monster's ATK by 500 for every battle it wins. Decrease this monster's DEF by 100 for every battle it wins. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Send this card to the Graveyard after your 3rd turn from it is summoned.)

 

ok, i revised them. how are they now?

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

your side of the field = your field

 

Defense Position

 

Dragon-Type

 

make = select

 

every = each

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2nd card needs: "sleect and activate 1 of the following effects:" in the effect.

 

Last card is overpowered.