Sammidysam Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 I was thinking of singing a song, and posting it on YCM. If I do, these would be the lyrics. Do you think they sound right? If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... Nobody will ever hurt 'chu again,If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... I will never see you again,You left me some day-a...I saw you in my heart...You left me some day-a...I saw you... In my... Hear-art...If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... I will always find you again,If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... I will nor lose you again,Because you left me that day...I saw you that day...You walked a-way...I saw you there-air-air...If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... I might as well kiss you again,If you saw me there...Give me a sign of trust...I said if you saw me there...Give me a sign, a sign like no other!-musical break...-If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... I might as well... Kiss you...Again... and forever...We will... Stay together...One family... In the thrust of the world...Waking up to sunshine...Seeing the world...If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y... I might as well...Kiss you again.One big family...Sitting under a tree.Opening up our mind.Waking up the farm...Seeing the skies.Swatting at the flies...Just me and you...If you-u open your eyes, touch the sky-y...We will see eachother... Once again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Wow! nice idea ive never seen someone make a song on ycm! im going to give you a +rep for doing that!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Well, thanks. I am hoping to record it with my microphone, and then post it with an attachment, but I won't have any musical instruments. And I hope it will be quiet when I record it. Even though I am saying this, I might not be able to even make a song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 it's pretty goodbut split them into verses....it's hard to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 When you hear the song it'll be easier to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 You see, every song has to have a chrous and verses, if you put them like this it's pretty hard to 'read' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 [quote='Pikachu™' pid='1408033' dateline='1227918200'] You see, every song has to have a chrous and verses, if you put them like this it's pretty hard to 'read' [/quote]-sigh- I just wrote down my lyrics so I could read it as I sang the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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