iKiller Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 [align=center]Hello All YCMers! You should know I'm getting further into graphics, and now I'm making Pokèmon Sprites? Pfft. Anyways, the following are my first Pokè-Sprites, so don't be too harsh. Actually, go ahead, I need all of the criticism I can get to improve! Try and guess which Pokèmon are in them! #1 #2 #3I Scratched The Top Of This Guys Head. It's Not Meant To Look Like Arms, But It Does :P Don't Comment On #3 Please, I Messed Up, I Did The Bordering And Recoloring Wrong, And Forgot To Finish It...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 I'm not exactly Jappio, but I am good enough to give tips.Work on your outline on the Hotmonlee-Arodactyl spliceThe holes on the third one need work as well.Hope I helped ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 The horn on the first one needs work. Also, did you save these as JPEG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Thanks for the comments ;) I know I messed up the borders, I suck at holes aswell :(. The first is actually "Hitmonlee", "Charizard", and "Ryhorn"... And OMG, check the file type yourself please? I'm not a .JPG noob, they're .PNG... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Nice for the first time. I like them. I once made a splice with Geodude and Crobat and they work well together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Hitmonlee+Ryhdon+Charizard needs a good amount of work. One major problem I have with it is taht you don't have your borders recolored. You still have a lot of the red and brown borders, even though it is now gray. Thee smooth almost metal like arms don't match the textures pervectly of everything else, so the thing doesn't flow well together. The claws on the right arm have that blue like color in them. The horn seems to be coming out on the weidest angle. On the left wing there are some unsightly smudges. Muk+Grimer I've seen done before, so it's hard to grade like that. Really also it's a tad boring, a Ok idea, but I mean there ins't much to it. I don't fully like how it placed on, but that's all I have to say. You've asked for no comments on number 3, so I won't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Thanks Jappio, I'll think about those on my next splices ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Hey I like #3! These are pretty good for your first splices! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2009Z Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 The third one really draws my attension, I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Thanks alot Catman :) Much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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