MarbleZone Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 This card will be making its debut in my fanfic soon, but I'd like to hear opinions on it before hand. [img]http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8421/36362qt4.jpg [/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, place all Spell and Trap Cards in your Graveyard on top of your Field Card Zone (they are still treated as being in the Graveyard). This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spell Cards, Trap Cards and Effect Monsters' effects. When this card attacks, remove from play the top 3 cards from your Field Card Zone. During each of your End Phases, remove from play the top card from your Field Card Zone. When there are no cards in your Field Card Zone, destroy this card. Yup, it's powerful. It's supposed to be. But really... Synchro Summoning Red Dragon Archfiend or Colossal Fighter is enough to take it down, so I'm hoping it's acceptable. I do not own the artwork, credit is given in place of the edition. Link to pic: http://juno-uno.deviantart.com/art/Scybora-the-sky-dragon-56129336 Link to artist: http://juno-uno.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 field card zone????you can only have 1 card on the field card zone..... 0.o"unless you mean Spell and Trap Card Zone.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 No, I mean exactly what I wrote. Think outside the box. ;) I will reword it for your convenience, though. EDIT: Done. It's no big deal, you just pile them in your Field Card Zone and remove them from the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Well, I like the originality of that part of the effect...Although it could use some work as it does seem overpowered considering all spell & traps are added...Perhaps just the cards from your graveyard would make it more balanced... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 An interesting effect though I can't say what deck strategies this would fit... I love the card itself though 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Well' date=' I like the originality of that part of the effect...Although it could use some work as it does seem overpowered considering all spell & traps are added...Perhaps just the cards from your graveyard would make it more balanced...[/quote'] Done! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jurassiced Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 9/10 very good oh and kudoa on crediting the artist on the card it self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 I'm not sure on the pic, good effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted November 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Thanks both of you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Oh cool, a card by Blackwind :D First of all, the immunity effect is an effect that shouldn't just be thrown around here and there. In the TCG, Venominaga is the only card to have that effect, AFAIK, and she's harder to summon than just by tribute summoning her with 2 tributes. I suggest that you change it to a simple and common 'You can pay x life points to negate the activation and the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Effect that targets this card' or 'This card cannot be destroyed by other card's effects'. Umm, what's the point of placing cards on top of your field spell o.o?You can't see the field spell anymore if you do that... Just change it into:When this card attacks, remove from play the top 3 Spell and/or Trap cards from your Graveyard. During each of your End Phases, remove from play the top Spell or Trap card from your Graveyard. When there are no Spell or Trap cards in your Graveyard, destroy this card.' Additionally, add the following line, if it really matters, so that it's exactly the same as you wanted:'This card's effects don't affect and don't count cards that were placed in your Graveyard after this card was summoned' or 'Your Spell and Trap cards are removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard'. And bye bye, gay placing cards on your field spell card! The art is nice, but somehow boring. Same for the stats, actually. The nice thing is that I didn't find any OCG errors. All in all, that's 7,68/10 for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 29, 2008 Report Share Posted November 29, 2008 Nice. Most original I've seen all day. ^_^9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 That is an Interesting idea. it is overpowered a little. pic is nice. 8/10Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Thanks everyone, especially Exiro for the detailed review! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 OCG is good enough, picture is excellent, your name fits the picture. 8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Very original, I like it. No OCG errors that I can find, good job! 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Thanks! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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