balevolence Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Not bad for a first card. Here are some tips. 1. Do not make fake types or.... add two together2. Special Summoned\3. get rid of the "a"4. um... i'm not sure how to word the last sentence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jurassiced Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 OCG fixes A monster destroyed by this monster is removed from play.= A monster destroyed by this cards effect is removed from play. im with monkey on this the last sentence looks odd heres a fix if thats what you where going for other wise i still looks odd =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 one = 1 a monster destroyed by this card____________________________________ Cool pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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