El Creador de las Dragón Hoja

[Gogeta™]

[align=center]Like the name? In english it would read: The Creator of the Dragon Blade, but I thought it'd be better in spanish. Comments and critisism are always welcomed. Enjoy...

 

 

The card can only be Summoned by Releasing 3 Spell Cards from your field from play. This card cannot be Summoned on the first turn in which this card was drawn. Once per turn you can place this card on your opponent's field until the end of your turn. While this card is on your opponent's field you can attack your opponent's life points directly. If you attack your opponent in this manner your opponent must activate 1 of the following effects.

-The original owner of this card takes half the damage his/her opponent has taken this turn.

-Pay 2ooo Life Points to keep this card on your field. You cannot attack with this card.

 

[spoiler=credit]http://meltingpot.fortunecity.com/malawi/457/necrosaro.jpg

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[Future L]

Use zero's, not o's, okay pic, Life Points, add a comma after turn. 7.9/10

[Professor Cobra]

Why did you use o's. Anyways, I'm not sure of the pic, capitalize Life Points all the time, If you use this effect, change the period after effects to this :, their, not his/her. 7/10

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

Instead of "El Creador de las Dragón Hoja," it should be "El Creador de la Hoja Dragón." This is b/c spanish grammar is different than ours, and for the name to translate properly, descriptive words have to follow what they are describing. Good try though! I like the card. Some OCG problems as mentioned above. Pic is okay. 8/10