Blud Boar

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CARD LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This card can only be Special Summoned by Sacrificing 2 Beast-Type monsters you control to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned Successfully, Negate the effect of any Spell or Trap Card that targets a Beast-Type monster you control and destroy it. Each time a Beast-Type monster you control as a Attack target by paying 500 Life Points you can negate the Attack.

 

 

 

Please No Negative Comments, Ty! Pic is from mtgstaples NOT DEVIANTART

 

[Sammidysam]

attack

Tributing

successfully

negate

"Each time a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as a Attack target by paying 500 Life Points you can negate the Attack."

 

6/10

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"this card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned Successfully, Negate the effect of any Spell or Trap Card that targets a Beast-Type monster you control and destroy it. Each time a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as an Attack target,pay 500 Life Points to negate the attack."

 

is what it should say.where pic credit? 8/10

[Sammidysam]

"this card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned Successfully' date=' Negate the effect of any Spell or Trap Card that targets a Beast-Type monster you control and destroy it. Each time a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as an Attack target,pay 500 Life Points to negate the attack."

 

is what it should say.where pic credit? 8/10

[/quote']I wouldn't take that effect. People would rate it 2/10 just for the lack of a capital letter.

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Thank you Mikooo

[Killey]

Just some corrections to your card text.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters you control."

 

Alternatively if you wanted to send the Beast-Type monsters to the grave instead of Tributing them then you could say this instead though it seems less likely you would be using this text but just in case here it is.:

 

"This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Beast-Type monsters you control to the Graveyard."

 

As for the rest of the text, I would change the second part of the sentence to this.

 

"While you control this face-up card, you can negate the effect(s) of a Spell and Trap Card that targets a Beast-Type monster you control and destroy that card. When a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the attack."

 

You may even want to include in the clause "negate the activation and effect(s)"

 

As for constructive criticism of the card I think this is incredibly overpowered. The summoning requirements are incredibly easy tp acheive. Being a DARK Level 8 monster means it works with Allure of Darkness and Trade-In so 3 of these and a full assortment of DARK beasts will mean that drawing into it will be incredibly easy. The stats of this card are high and partnered with that built in protection for itself and other Beast-Type cards means you can overwhelm your opponent easily. Furthermore, you probably don't even need to run a dedicated Beast Deck to make use of this card. You could always use DNA Transplant to change everything to Beast-Type monsters giving your Synchro summons overdominating staying power, which is bad enough considering the built in protection that Stardust carries though it would screw over Thought Ruler Archfiend.

 

First off, I would tack on the following clause "This card can't be Special Summoned except by..." so that it can't be pitched with Trade-in then resurrected with Monster Reborn. Second, I would make the summoning requirements much more difficult then Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters. As it stands it is far too easy to get on the field. You could keep it as a DARK monster but I think DARK attribute monsters are all too common in the game and have far too much support as is so I would change it to a different attribute, EARTH maybe? Third, I would remove the clause where it can negate attacks. It doesn't need to be a Thought Ruler Archfiend and Krebons for Beast-Type monsters. If you want to keep both then the summoning requirements better be difficult to acheive and the cost of negating an attack should be higher like 800+ Life Points.

 

Depending on the summoning requirements I wouldn't be surprised if this card saw a lot of play coupled with Giant Baboon.

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Just some corrections to your card text.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters you control."

 

Alternatively if you wanted to send the Beast-Type monsters to the grave instead of Tributing them then you could say this instead though it seems less likely you would be using this text but just in case here it is.:

 

"This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Beast-Type monsters you control to the Graveyard."

 

As for the rest of the text' date=' I would change the second part of the sentence to this.

 

"While you control this face-up card, you can negate the effect(s) of a Spell and Trap Card that targets a Beast-Type monster you control and destroy that card. When a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the attack."

 

You may even want to include in the clause "negate the activation and effect(s)"

 

As for constructive criticism of the card I think this is incredibly overpowered. The summoning requirements are incredibly easy tp acheive. Being a DARK Level 8 monster means it works with Allure of Darkness and Trade-In so 3 of these and a full assortment of DARK beasts will mean that drawing into it will be incredibly easy. The stats of this card are high and partnered with that built in protection for itself and other Beast-Type cards means you can overwhelm your opponent easily. Furthermore, you probably don't even need to run a dedicated Beast Deck to make use of this card. You could always use DNA Transplant to change everything to Beast-Type monsters giving your Synchro summons overdominating staying power, which is bad enough considering the built in protection that Stardust carries though it would screw over Thought Ruler Archfiend.

 

First off, I would tack on the following clause "This card can't be Special Summoned except by..." so that it can't be pitched with Trade-in then resurrected with Monster Reborn. Second, I would make the summoning requirements much more difficult then Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters. As it stands it is far too easy to get on the field. You could keep it as a DARK monster but I think DARK attribute monsters are all too common in the game and have far too much support as is so I would change it to a different attribute, EARTH maybe? Third, I would remove the clause where it can negate attacks. It doesn't need to be a Thought Ruler Archfiend and Krebons for Beast-Type monsters. If you want to keep both then the summoning requirements better be difficult to acheive and the cost of negating an attack should be higher like 800+ Life Points.

 

Depending on the summoning requirements I wouldn't be surprised if this card saw a lot of play coupled with Giant Baboon.

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For the Thought Ruler thing, Synchro Summon it if you dont have the Blud Boar on the field

[Kale]

Just some corrections to your card text.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters you control."

 

Alternatively if you wanted to send the Beast-Type monsters to the grave instead of Tributing them then you could say this instead though it seems less likely you would be using this text but just in case here it is.:

 

"This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Beast-Type monsters you control to the Graveyard."

 

As for the rest of the text' date=' I would change the second part of the sentence to this.

 

"While you control this face-up card, you can negate the effect(s) of a Spell and Trap Card that targets a Beast-Type monster you control and destroy that card. When a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the attack."

 

You may even want to include in the clause "negate the activation and effect(s)"

 

As for constructive criticism of the card I think this is incredibly overpowered. The summoning requirements are incredibly easy tp acheive. Being a DARK Level 8 monster means it works with Allure of Darkness and Trade-In so 3 of these and a full assortment of DARK beasts will mean that drawing into it will be incredibly easy. The stats of this card are high and partnered with that built in protection for itself and other Beast-Type cards means you can overwhelm your opponent easily. Furthermore, you probably don't even need to run a dedicated Beast Deck to make use of this card. You could always use DNA Transplant to change everything to Beast-Type monsters giving your Synchro summons overdominating staying power, which is bad enough considering the built in protection that Stardust carries though it would screw over Thought Ruler Archfiend.

 

First off, I would tack on the following clause "This card can't be Special Summoned except by..." so that it can't be pitched with Trade-in then resurrected with Monster Reborn. Second, I would make the summoning requirements much more difficult then Tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters. As it stands it is far too easy to get on the field. You could keep it as a DARK monster but I think DARK attribute monsters are all too common in the game and have far too much support as is so I would change it to a different attribute, EARTH maybe? Third, I would remove the clause where it can negate attacks. It doesn't need to be a Thought Ruler Archfiend and Krebons for Beast-Type monsters. If you want to keep both then the summoning requirements better be difficult to acheive and the cost of negating an attack should be higher like 800+ Life Points.

 

Depending on the summoning requirements I wouldn't be surprised if this card saw a lot of play coupled with Giant Baboon.

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For the Thought Ruler thing, Synchro Summon it if you dont have the Blud Boar on the field

 

wow, nicely done, Killey. ;) i must say, everything i wanted to say is there plus some.

 

btw, dont double post. its against the rules...

 

i like the card, but i dont like the way it was executed. read above to see the fixes.

 

have a nice day, and good luck in the future. ;)

 

~K

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Thank You!!

[Professor Cobra]

Tributing 2, good pic, add a comma after Life Points in the last effect, change to FIRE, Type to Pyro. Lower case successfully. 8/10

[Jurassiced]

7.5/10 nice everything that could be said has been said ^^

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[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Not a bad idea. (in my opinion)

 

Some negative effects would be nice though.

 

Maybe up the lvl to 9 as well.

 

7/10