Dark Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 As I fade away...Feeling the morning dew.I can see your face...And then I get so blue. As I remember you...How you hurt me so.It reminds me of...Letting that feeling go... go-o-o-o... And I want, I need...Something of my own to hold...And I see, I feel...I feel it, it's so cold... And I wonder why, you even try...You come back again and again... I won't despise,Your fairless tries...You broke me so,Now you never let me go... go-o-o-o... And I want, I need...Something of my own to hold...And I see, I feel...I feel it, it's so cold... I take a walk,And fight with myself,I don't know where to turn... I see the world,In a very new way,And I feel that burn... But now the sun is lighting up,My heart is mended now,I can see your face again,But I don't let my feelings show... And I want, I need...Something of my own to hold...And I see, I feel...I feel it, it's so cold... Your fading away again.Reminicing the memories... of you. Yeah, not that good, but I still need to edit it. It was how I broke up with my girlfriend. Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Its preety good for making it on your own. I'm sorry for you about your girlfriend, I can relate since my girlfriend broke up with me too and it does hurt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 The song is similar to mine(What I mean is that you wrote yours the same way, and I think you got the idea of a song from me), but you wrote yours better. I sang mine into a microphone, but Yu-Gi-Oh! Card Maker doesn't accept .wsm files. I think they are .wsm files I get. I can try something else... But I can only send it via e-mail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted December 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 No offense Sam, but I never even read or heard your song! :D But, maybe I did get the idea from you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 ' pid='1427302' dateline='1228355193']No offense Sam' date=' but I never even read or heard your song! :D But, maybe I did get the idea from you?[/quote']Oh yeah, I forgot to PM you. 0.0 I made a song awhile ago... It's always a wish I could attach it to YCM, but I cannot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted December 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Was your song about breaking up, or was it just a sad song in general? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 I don't even know. I just sang it randomly. It might be about breaking up... I have no clue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 You should record yourself singing it and then post it as a video or something cuz I want to know the tune your thinking for this song. Very good and I'm sorry about your relationship. The Crimson One,Miranda-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 You should record yourself singing it and then post it as a video or something cuz I want to know the tune your thinking for this song. Very good and I'm sorry about your relationship. The Crimson One' date='Miranda-chan[/quote']YCM doesn't accept .wsm files which is my singing. YCM doesn't accept HTML code, used by videos. YCM ruins songs like that. Yet, nobody ever visits my song. Isn't that completely strange Dark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 True, I can always PM a mod about HTML codes, but I doubt that would work. But, I have sung it before, the tune is off a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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