.Impact Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Hi im new and yea i dont even have an avatar. but he is my first card. I think it's decent. But i want tough critism. I want to get good so help me out plz!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Pic is wasteless...... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calebjesse Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 its alright but it would be better if u could play the card 7/10 and get a better pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guilhermees Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 BennyD, you comented my post, I'll comment you now :DChoose a better image. Card back is a BAD suggestion.Horrible effect. Should be: Draw a card to your hand.Just this. Or 'Draw two cards to your hand by paying 500 LP.'7/10, 'cause your my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 "Pay 1000 Life Points.Choose 1 card in your deck and add it to your hand." is what it should say.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbaile Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 The idea has potential... i would say somthing like...Pay 1000 life points search your deck for 5 cards. Suffle you deck then place the 5 selected cards in any order at the top of your deck. You may then draw one card.6/10 (for the idea) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted December 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Thanks guy Sbaile i lke your idea i might use it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbaile Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Heres my version of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted December 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 dude thats way better than mine thanks ill learn from it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightxKira Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 hmmm a better picture maybe, sbailes version is good so ill give yours 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 most things have been said above. OCG errors pic aint good. needs work.Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megaworm Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 Useful, could be overpowered, or could not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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