Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 I think I did okay trying to balance this card. What do YOU think?[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned by removing 2 monsters in your Graveyard from play during a turn in which you discarded a card(s) from your hand to the Graveyard due to the effect of a Spell or Trap card you control. If this monster was Special Summoned on your opponent's turn, it is now the End Phase of his/her turn. This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. [spoiler=Image Credit]http://www.quizilla.com/stories/2251015/surrounded-by-darkness-hieicharacter-profiles Oh, and I think my OCG may be a lil off. If anyone can help me out with this, it would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fog38 Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 I was reading it, and all was good, then I got to the attack life points directly part. UGH. No monster with that much atk should be able to do direct damage. Don't get me wrong, this monster needs a really powerful effect, just maybe something more original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 I was reading it' date=' and all was good, then I got to the attack life points directly part. UGH. No monster with that much atk should be able to do direct damage. Don't get me wrong, this monster needs a really powerful effect, just maybe something more original.[/quote'] Thanks for the advice. If you or anyone else has an idea to help point me in the right direction as far as a better effect is concerned, please share it with me. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Take off the last sentence. 5.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Take off the last sentence. 5.9/10 If I did that, then this mnster wouldn't be worth using. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Special Summoned, good pic, their, not his/her, lower level to 9, the last effect makes it overpowered, so remove it. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Lower level to 9, good pic, remove the last effect, capitalize summoned, use their instead of his/her. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 remove the last effect. 7/10 I don't know if Komori would even be worth using w/o the last effect. Maybe if there was an alternate effect? Im open to suggestions. ^_^ use their instead of his/her I'm pretty sure that "his/her" is correct OCG. If there is some exception that I'm overlooking, please let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elvryndle Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 his/her is a correct OCG term, you don't see it much, but trust me when I found this site I spent hours poring over all of my cards to learn OCG correctly, take a look at mine, that is if someone could tell me how to post. Only a few are done as of yet, but ill post the ones that are.*how to make a new room. srry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 If you took out the last effect, you could still attack, but directly is a bit extreme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 what about this for the last sentence: If your oponent controls no DARK monsters, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Yeah that would probably work out better. I'm not sure if this card has anything to do with the Komouri Dragon (something like that) but the name is similar so I couldn't help but think of it. Maybe tie that card in to it's effect or something...as stated before just being able to attack directly (regardless of how difficult to summon) with that much ATK is ridiculous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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