new archfienc please rate

[reneandnicole]

i tryied to make this card really convincing so please rate and tell me what might be wrong with it. effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "Prince, Lord Of The Archfiend". This cards gets these effects, based on the number of "Archfiend" monsters on both sides of the field. 1+: This card cannot be destroyed by a card effect. 2+: This card can attack all opponents Monsters once in a row. 3+: Discard one "Archfiend" Monster from your hand to negate the activation and effect of any Spell, Trap and Monster card(s). 4+: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. 5+: Pay half of your Life Points to destroy all cards on the field and in both players hands, in addition Special Summon one "Prince, Lord Of The Archfiend" from your Deck of Graveyard.

[Hobbes96]

you spelled edition wrong and don't write the name in all caps.

you should put dotp-en001, because konami only uses 3-4 letters, no more

[LiAM]

Name: CAPS?

 

stars: too high

 

availabitliy, edition not addtion ( thats maths?)

 

DOTPC-ENO00 = DOTPC-EN001 etc...

 

1996 kazuki - change to your name and date (because that actually a copyright slightly, and it proves you made it.

 

picture is blurry and simple, doesnt show most of the mosnters body.

 

some minor and some Major OCG errors, consider revising.

 

overall, bad, but nothing terrible

[Professor Cobra]

Pic is blurry, lower case most words. Lower level to 8, take out 1 Addidition, use 1, not one, loewr case monster, Monster Cards in that case only. There is more. 4/10

[Spire]

The OCG is fine, but the pic is blurry, and please, DO NOT, cap out the name and type, please.