Shadowcraft Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 So to this thread i'm going to add some singles that do not have anything in common with each other ( although this is likely going to change.)Here's the first one:[spoiler=Image Credit] http://www.magicdeckvortex.com/ART3/aethersnipe_art_by_boros_szikszai.jpg Is it over or underpowered, I think it is quite hard to destroy, but I'm known for being wrong on these kind of matters. :) New Card : [spoiler= Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 EARTH monsters from your Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, each card with "Tribal" in its card name gains 400 ATK and DEF. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 level 5 or lower Beast-Warrior - type monster from your Deck. [spoiler=Image Credit]http://magicdeckvortex.com/ART3/ajani_goldmane_art_by_aleski_briscot.jpg New Card 2 : [spoiler=Image Credit]http://magicdeckvortex.com/ART3/adarkar_valkyrie_art_by_jeremy_jarvis.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darknesskiller Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 this is a very well balanced card NOT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 hm, nope, don;t see any problems ^^ congrats on great card ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Here, try this: Name: Colassal Abomination LV: 7 During your Draw Phase, you can draw 2 cards instead of 1. When this Attack Position card is selected as an attack target, it is changed to Defense Position. This card cannot declare an attack. ATK/ 1650DEF/ 3350 There you go, there is the remodeled version of mine. I didn't change the effect itself, but I believe that is the correct OCG. Great Card! 8.7/10 :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowcraft Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Here' date=' try this: Name: Colassal Abomination LV: 7 During your Draw Phase, you can draw 2 cards instead of 1. When this Attack Position card is selected as an attack target, it is changed to Defense Position. This card cannot declare an attack. ATK/ 1650DEF/ 3350 There you go, there is the remodeled version of mine. I didn't change the effect itself, but I believe that is the correct OCG. Great Card! 8.7/10 :mrgreen:[/quote'] Well, I want to be so that the card has to be in Attack Position, to get the draw effect, but thanks for the tips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 OOPS. :oops: Here you go: During your Draw Phase, if this card is in Attack Position, you can draw 2 cards instead of 1. When this Attack Position card is selected as an attack target, it is changed to Defense Position. This card cannot declare an attack. THere you go. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowcraft Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Thanks, I'll change that to it, but I'm very tired, so I'll sleep before conducting any changes to that card...zzz....zzz... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 IT'S 4:30 PM!!!Wait...You don't live in the U.S....do you...?Well, I'm glad I could help. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Pretty good, pic is nice and the effect is decent, 8.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowcraft Posted December 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Re-worded the colossal Beast and added a new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Awesome new card! There is one very minor OCG problem though, at the end: ...Special Summon 1 level 5 or lower Beast-Warrior - type monster from your... Should be: ...Special Summon 1 level 5 or lower Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Redeemer Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 First card OP 2nd has good effect, good pics, 6.9/10 1st card 8.6/10 2nd card overall 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 These are pretty awesome, the first one is great, the second one, maybe lower the special summon effect to lv 4 monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowcraft Posted December 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 First card OP 2nd has good effect' date=' good pics, 6.9/10 1st card 8.6/10 2nd card overall 7.7/10[/quote'] Why you think the first one is OP? I'll be adding some fish and rock- type monsters soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowcraft Posted December 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Bumped with new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Colossal Beast of Abomination : Change the Beast-Type to Sea Serpent-TypeTribal Chief, Yokuro : Change Special Summon 1 level 5 Beast Warrior-Type to level 4 because it is overpoweredValkyrie of Light : OCG errors : - destroys = destroy Rating :Pic : 9/10 (Nice!)Effect : 8/10OCG : 9/10Total : 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Pretty Niiiice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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