pooppoop1 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Pic : http://codyknowsbest.com/yahoo_site_admin/assets/images/evil_grendal.300174944_std.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 The first sentence I don't believe is needed. attack = ATK, pretty good, pretty gory :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 The blood, well.....nevermind. OCG errors: attack = ATK Pretty good, 8.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 few spelling errors, controler = controller and level 4 or below = level 4 or lower. attack is halved = ATK is halved first line is unnessacery equiped = equipped in addition, = (not needed, just put a comma, to show the effect has a following one, a full stop means its a separate oneE.G. Discard 1 card from your hand. Effect... Discard 1 card from your hand, to draw 2 more... etc... hope it helped ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 pretty good, although it doesn't specify where to special summon from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Half the equipped monster's ATK. Level 4 or lower, good pic, not sure on first effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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