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My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist


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Do you like this Fan Fic? (this poll taken straight from CB123's Fan Fic)  

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  1. 1. Do you like this Fan Fic? (this poll taken straight from CB123's Fan Fic)

    • Man! I just LOVE this Fan Fic!
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    • This is pretty good!
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    • It's good.
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    • It's bad.
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    • I don't really like this.
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    • This Fan Fic SUCKS!!!!
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I need names for all the different types of shipping. The only one that is really supported in this fan-fic is [John x Kim shipping]. I previously named it Legionshipping, but that name is kinda blatant that John is involved. [Chris x Kim shipping] is kinda supported, but I don't have a name for that either, or a real lot of evidence for it. Then again, the names for shipping aren't generally made by the writers, usually it's done by the fans. Who has ideas for names of the shippings?

 

Personally I'd feel you should do more couple relationships if you write sequels

Agreed.

 

I do have to say that' date=' if this was made into an anime (most likely censored by 4kids):

-Chapter 12 would probably be replaced based on what they imply they'll do to Kim. That scene could be replaced quite easily, just as long as the characters defeat King Rogue (who used Cloudians) and they meet Walter.

-There would probably be another season after the ending but before the epilogue to show how John deals with the kinda permanent event (no death) and the rest of the school year. During that, there would probably be [Chris x Destiny shipping'], [Destiny x John shipping] (I'm figuring that Destiny would be to John how Rebecca was to Yugi or Blair to Jaden), or possibly [Chris x John shipping] (if their friendship miraculously recovers). That's a lot of stuff, but probably not enough to fill up another season. Of course there would have to be another villain, but I don't know how that would work out, especially since I already have the plan of the Wicked Gods getting defeated. Any ideas for like a pre-Epilogue villain?

-Anything else you think would be censored by 4kids?

-I'm also trying to think of where each season would end and how many seasons this yugioh would have. I wonder what this fan-fic would be like as a manga.

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You should rename this fic into something incredibly stupid' date=' like YuGiOh 6E's.

Only then Konami will be interested. Not because your story is bad, but because it has a normal name right now.

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I understand. I still won't change the name. Also, I don't think I'll make that extra "season" after the kinda permanent event because:

-It would be pretty stupid since it would only be there to add shipping.

-I don't really have a villain for it. The one who will be not completely defeated at the end of this fic will be in the sequel, which will have Kim as the main character.

-The event takes a lot out of the story. Continuing on would just kinda ruin the ending and leave an unsatisfying feeling in the end.

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You should rename this fic into something incredibly stupid' date=' like YuGiOh 6E's.

Only then Konami will be interested. Not because your story is bad, but because it has a normal name right now.

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I understand. I still won't change the name. Also, I don't think I'll make that extra "season" after the kinda permanent event because:

-It would be pretty stupid since it would only be there to add shipping.

-I don't really have a villain for it. The one who will be not completely defeated at the end of this fic will be in the sequel, which will have Kim as the main character.

-The event takes a lot out of the story. Continuing on would just kinda ruin the ending and leave an unsatisfying feeling in the end.

 

It might indeed be better to keep it at one book.

You can also re-write the events of Kim's point of view.

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You should rename this fic into something incredibly stupid' date=' like YuGiOh 6E's.

Only then Konami will be interested. Not because your story is bad, but because it has a normal name right now.

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I understand. I still won't change the name. Also, I don't think I'll make that extra "season" after the kinda permanent event because:

-It would be pretty stupid since it would only be there to add shipping.

-I don't really have a villain for it. The one who will be not completely defeated at the end of this fic will be in the sequel, which will have Kim as the main character.

-The event takes a lot out of the story. Continuing on would just kinda ruin the ending and leave an unsatisfying feeling in the end.

 

It might indeed be better to keep it at one book.

You can also re-write the events of Kim's point of view.

 

I'm not too sure. I need some other opinions on that first.

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Great a payback time duel.

 

Oh and that was almost too insulting for what John said to Kim in not having any skills

 

He was under mind control' date=' remember?

People do weird things when under mind control.

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Rag, remember that the Wicked Gods "tainted" John's mind with their own ideas and thoughts. John didn't really have a lot of control over anything.

 

LC, Neither Adolf Hitler nor Barack Obama are/were under mind control. Hitler was a Psycho Commander. This is forever shown on a Yugioh card.

Barack Obama seems like he has a plan and he seems like he's really trying. The economic mess won't be fixed anytime soon. It may take him more than 4 years to fix it, but that's alright, as long as the situation is better by the end of his term(s).

 

Chapter 68 up. I thought of calling Kim x John shipping Legionshipping because they both run decks that get cards out very fast, like a legion or swarm deck (John with his Warrior Toolbox / Swarm / Synchro deck and Kim with her Easter Eggs), and for the fact that John's last name has Legion in it. Anybody agree or disagree?

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I was just joking again. I love it when people take sick jokes seriously.

I respect Obama very much. He's way better than McCain, but let's face it, who wouldn't be?

Hitler was a crazy lunatic. But you can't say he wasn't a very intelligent man either.

Your last two chapters were OK, I relly liked this Duel.

I'm looking forward to the next one.

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All right then. I can procrastinate writing the next chapter until tomorrow. BTW' date=' that means this fan-fic is guaranteed to last at least 2 weeks or so at that time schedule. The end is near, my friend. The end is near.

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Life will sure be different without this fic.

You will write a new one, won't you?

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Yes. It will be the one with Kim as the main character. It will take place after the epilogue of this one. I still need to think of a name for it.

 

and exactly how much time will pass between the end of this fic and the beginning of the next one? (That way will make it easier for their relationship to develop)

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Egg-citing sequal? The Easter Entrorpy? The sequal of EoaD: history of the egg deck?

 

The Easter what? The Easter Entropy? How does that make sense?

Also, I may give Kim a second deck to use from time to time in the sequel, though.

Now I'm starting to think "Easter Epiphany" is a good name. It sounds too Christian though. All I know is that the sequel will be egg-citing. I already know some plot points that will be in it.

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Yes. It will be the one with Kim as the main character. It will take place after the epilogue of this one. I still need to think of a name for it.

 

and exactly how much time will pass between the end of this fic and the beginning of the next one? (That way will make it easier for their relationship to develop)

 

The epilogue takes place during the summer after this school year. The next fan-fic starts at the beginning of the next school year, so it would start about 1 year after this one started.

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personally I think Kim's second deck should be split evenly with the first just to make it more of a challenge

 

I'll see if I can do that. I probably won't keep track' date=' though.

 

then I hope their relationship ends on a good note when this fic finally ends

 

Well, they won't hate each other in the end, I'll tell you that.

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yeah well they don't have to love each other either.

 

Do that and you'll have less room to maneuver in the sequel

 

No comment' date=' except "touché."

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glad to see you agree with me, or you can make their relationship go downhill at the end of the 2nd, which in turn opens the opportunity for it to go back in the 3rd

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