dbatesman91™ Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 its an esper from final fantasy xii. i got d pic from Google. its prob terrible bt i need 2 learn from it. ur comments would b greatly appreciated 8). ive edited it now except 4 d picture cause i cant get 1 nd im no gud at art. ne ideas?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 It's good for a first. Decent stats for the level, original idea, and an interesting effect. The only flaws are that the picture is a little pixellated, it does not use a real type, and the attack boost in the effect sound slightly cheap. Overall, good start. 7/10. I hope you make more :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbatesman91™ Posted December 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 wow i woz expectly bout 2/10 or lower bt tanks Starly_64 uve inspired me 2 keep goin nd improving my card making skills Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 Sure thing. You're better than most of the newcomers on here. Just keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 Well the card idea is not bad, you need a better pic, give the pic a backround, OCG is off but only how you worded it. 3/10 O and give it a real type ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 1: fake type2: uncapatalize 'the'3: Esper type = (Esper-Type/ a mosnter with Esper in its name etc.)4: OP, 2500 ATK and 3000 DEF, inc getting 1500 ATK for epsers (4000 ATK)=OP5: bad picture for card, no background, blurry. ;) should help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 well, you tried and you accept criticism, you deserve props for that. Listen to yujioooh, i agree w/ his tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbatesman91™ Posted December 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 thanks everyone 4 d very constructive critism nd the fact that ne 1 showed interest put a :D on my face. bt im new at dis so could u explain wat OCG is nd mayb giv a tip or 2 on how to improve quality of pictures for future cards. also wat type would u classify dis as? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 Change 1500 to 400, Esper-Type monster you control, pic is blurry, has no color in background. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbatesman91™ Posted December 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 can some1 help r mayb get me a better pic with background cause im useless at art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 1: fake type2: uncapatalize 'the'3: Esper type = (Esper-Type/ a mosnter with Esper in its name etc.)4: OP' date=' 2500 ATK and 3000 DEF, inc getting 1500 ATK for epsers (4000 ATK)=OP5: bad picture for card, no background, blurry. ;) should help.[/quote'] As harsh as he judges this is all problems with your card good luck i hope you can fix 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
!The One! Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 Its not bad but you done well for your first cardPicture is terriblebut I'm new here so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 Pics. need backgrounds, some a little blurry, other than that nice. 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachary888888 Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 very blury hu is esper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbatesman91™ Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 very blury hu is esper u've never played final fantasy 10 have u. espers r summons used in the game. dey r really powerful nd make completion of ff10 a lot easier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 pic is Blurry and Background and OCG but i will not take it so hard on u because when i was new here people hated my cards so 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbatesman91™ Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 pic is Blurry and Background and OCG but i will not take it so hard on u because when i was new here people hated my cards so 4.5/10cheers 4 d honest comment.just 2 correct myself frm bove it wox ff12 not ff10 stupid men :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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